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Reincarnated as a Hero- and the Wrong Gender?! (Hiatus)

Hinata had pretty good luck, as a high school student living in modern Japan. The cutest of girlfriends, the best of grades. Lots of friends, and even the teachers liked him! Yes, life was never bad, and Hinata was never lacking. However, out of the blue, he trips and falls down the subway stairs, breaking his neck- because in truth, when mages from another world summon heroes, they don't always have the best of timing! Hinata understands well enough when he wakes up in that fantasy land that he's been reincarnated, but there are a few... problems. A.) Hinata has been reincarnated as a girl, instead of some hot guy with an instant harem. What the hell? B.) He, now a she, is a demi-human, a hated, second class race in this misogynistic world! C.) She has no support, because she woke up face down in the mud in some random forest! Taking on a new name and countenance, the guy who should have been a hero will have to start from the ground up- and in a world like this, there are some crazy, CRAZY adventures to be had! Being re-written, now, this version indefinitely hiatused. (TRIGGER/TURN-OFFS WARNINGS BELOW) *Sex scenes *Bloody combat *Yuri/GxG, apparently some people don’t like that *Futa/Futanari MC (she really is just a girl most of the time, though. Don’t worry, I promise this is a legitimate story, not only an eroge) *Sexism/Racism (medieval times) https://discord.gg/bRfbqXzsdF (good for ten uses)

Rebuilt_Kitsunii · Fantasy
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Honestly I'm kind of speechless from a comment I just received, but I need a bit of feedback, from more than one, cos I've got a huge choice to make.

To be honest, I don't feel passion for this story anymore. When I started it, it was initially a joke- to support my friend coming out as trans. Since then, I've moved 300 miles, supported a family of four, that went south, spent time recovering from wounds in the mountains, then went to trade school.

Teacher dipped in drugs, and I didn't want any part, and things went sideways. Aside from tangling with that sort of crowd, and then having to run away from it, there was another bout of homelessness, and then a 1600 mile relocation.

Why are you over sharing, author, what's the point?

I've just grown a lot, in most ways. I know more, I've experienced more, and this story no longer feels indicative of my skill level, or my abilities, or what wisdom I've acquired.

Honestly, I thought to restart it and put it in stores, as a better novel with more world building, etc. but a reader would rather I post the rewrite, which I would be able to update consistently, here. I wouldn't mind that, putting a rewrite here, starting fresh, making this a much better story, and only putting it to stores as a way to support me if people wanted.

But what do you guys think? Any thoughts appreciated. Unfortunately, this story just like the depth that I'm capable of right now and that's why I've been struggling to write it further.

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