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Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer

[Warning BTW! If you read the reviews before reading, you'll get basically Fake News. One of them is basically 'I dont understand english so the book is bad' so! Just give it a try, if you don't like it, you don't like it. But the reviews are misleading.] A classic Pokemon story with a System. I want Opinions on the story quality, direction, and writing for battles or otherwise. Nobody in the Discord wants to do it, so you lucky fellows will have to do! After beating Radical Red Hardcore Nuzlocke without losing a single Pokemon, Ace was rebirthed in the Pokemon world with a System! Are you sick and tired of everyone and their mother having a Lucario? Grossed out by the borderline Bestiality between Trainers and Gardevoir? Looking for something fresh with Pokemon that are rarely used?! Then this is probably for you! (Uses Radical Red Abilities, they're explained anyway so don't worry about it.)

AgentMonke · Cómic
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153 Chs

Don't threaten me! I'll form a Union, I swear!

He looked around as everything started lighting up and spreading farther and farther. Just the clearing they were in started getting bigger! The Tagged Trees started shifting around and Ace could see that the glow continued past a river from the Snowy Mountain.

The area that was closely resembling a rectangle grew and changed the geology of the Earth itself.

Even the Trees shifted into a designated area that looked like a Park type. Ace was stunned as the table appeared again with a bunch of people in black suits.

Elesa watched while stroking Emolga's ears, she rubbed her chin, "Hmm… I knew it was magic… Well, he's so amazing, of course this kind of thing chose him. As expected of my Darling~" Ace looked at her speechlessly before turning back to the table.

Ace looked at the side and dropped a Sack with all the Berry Tree Saplings. It got sucked into the table as Ace put in the Home Upgrade Token, the same thing happened.

A Suited man tapped on Ace's shoulder, showing him a large tablet.

[Optional Upgrades]

[Blessed by Celebi- 10 Million]

[Pleasant Fragrance- 15]

[More Berry Trees of all Types- 10,000]

[More Apple Trees of all Types- 15,000]

[Teleportation Gate to the entire World- 100 Billion]

[Blessed by Enamorus- 10 Million]

[...]

Ace was stunned and only chose a few. The Trees and Pleasant Fragrance. He looked at the Enamorus blessing and his lips twitched. The City didn't have to get blessed you know…

He looked around, spooked as he heard a clicking tongue sound. He turned back and clicked on the Enamorus Blessing while shedding tears. He swore he better not be bothered by that strange Pokemon!

After that, Ace turned back and looked at the Blueprints for the City. He looked over and waved at Elesa, "Come here." Elesa pointed at herself before walking over. Ace held her back, asking, "What do you think about this one…"

Elesa smiled at him and they started choosing the lay out of the City. It had to be said, in this regard, Elesa was much better than him.

Ace basically said, 'Oreburgh. Circle. Circle City.' but when he said, 'Tagtree Thicket. Rectangle.' Elesa shut him down. She swiped the designs one by one, looking at them carefully before handing Ace Emolga and customizing the City herself.

Ace and Emolga looked at each other. Emolga spread her little hands, saying helplessly, "Emol~" Ace looked at her speechlessly, "What do you mean 'That's Elesa for ya~'???"

He shook Emolga, "You let this happen!" Emolga was dizzy, "E-MOL-GAAAA!" with spiral eyes. After Elesa was done with the city layout, she personally placed all kinds of buildings and designed a park, after that, she modified the House and clicked on the Upgrades she wanted.

She even put down a Fashion Store and just started creating clothes wildly. Then a huge company Building. Then a secret Casino. Then a HUGE Ferris Wheel. Then a Speed Battle Race Track…

Then and Then and Then…

Even the System guy started sweating!

Ace and Emolga were numb looking at a beautiful fountain with a statue of Ace in the middle, holding his fist in the sky. There was even lightning carved into the stone, around the fist…

Hm, looking at it. It was really a work of art. Almost magical since the electrical arcs were around the fist, some of them didn't even touch the fist-BAH!

No! Who wants a statue of themselves in their own town! That's so embarrassing! Ace quickly wiped off the face as Elesa frowned, "Hey! I spent a lot of time getting your face perfect!" Ace was speechless, "Why do you want to put a statue of me in the middle of a fountain!? I'm not dead!"

Elesa held her hips, puffing her cheeks, "When you die I want people to remember you forever!" Ace covered his mouth and gasped, "Elesa… I love you!" Elesa nodded and reverted the change, "I know!" 

She even made a Gym inside the Speed Battle Track. There was a bridge going over the track itself that led to the Gym that Elesa personalized to look like a Fashion Catwalk. She liked the idea of a Speed Battle, she thought that she could do her Gym Battles like this.

Anyway, Ace was numb by now.

Just let her do what you want and you get rewarded at night! Who would disagree?

The Work started immediately after Elesa pressed [Confirm]

She watched as all the suits walked away, doing things. Though it seemed like Magic to her. She looked at Ace, "Can they do it all in a month?" Ace rubbed his nose, "Last time it took two weeks…" he looked at the screen in front of him with twitching lips…

[Speed up- 1 Million/Hour]

[Leave a Tip and Rate your service- X BP]

He rubbed his forehead and tipped the System 2 Million BP, [Last Construction was really great and fast. I had no complaints.]

[Thank you!]

[Here's your reward!]

Ace looked at his hand as he was holding a picture of him and Elesa standing in front of the Construction Table. He was speechless. He handed the picture to Elesa and she smiled, keeping it.

A Suit grabbed Ace and pulled him away, "You need to work." Ace was confused, "Huh?" The Suit replied, "Last time it wasn't necessary, but now there was nothing here. If you don't do something, someone will have questions."

Ace replied strangely, "Okay? Who cares?" The System replied, "This is altering the future significantly, because of your own presence, the Paldea Region will flourish into one of the Most Popular Regions in the world. 7 more cities will be built like this one."

Ace froze and looked at him in disbelief, "You're getting me to work so that I'll spend 7 Billion more BP building cities everywhere else?!" The System looked at him before saying after a moment, "Turns out my Host can turn on his IQ sometimes."

Ace was speechless for 5 seconds, "No way! I need that BP! You want me to work for free!?" The System was speechless, "You've been working for free this whole time, okay?!" Ace crossed his arms, "Nuh uh! I need a Mission."

The System guy was stunned, "Then people will complain that you're a system slave." Ace sneered, "And? BP is my life! No Mission, no bueno!" The System's lips twitched.

[Build your Own City- Not Completed- Reward: 50% BP returned]

Ace stood up and dragged the System guy forward, "Ha! How about I help you guys? Anyway, it should speed up the process, right?" 

System: …

[Reward: 50% BP returned… 5 minutes faster completion…]

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Hmm! Should I put down 5 more? I dont knooooow~ Depending on the Stone count, maybe~ Or maybe someone can throw down a joke, so diabolical, so funny, that I post another chapter just to see another one!

You guys will decide if you get more today or not

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