Chapter 3: Spatial Rift (Rewritten)

In the past I was an orphan, there is a reason I became a lightweight champion it was because I didn't have anyone and this made me targeted by the bully. It started when I was 6 years old I was getting bullied at that time, but slowly i became stronger and at the age of 10 I managed to fight back those 4 years older than me.

After I beat them, my master who walked around noticed my action and know I'm very talented. He decided to train me to become a lightweight championship. You can name it either taekwondo, karate, boxing, muay thai, silat, judo and other martial arts i have learned it.

They call me a genius, it's a pity because i have a high IQ but I was busy in martial arts. Fortunately, every single time I take a test my ranking is within the TOP 3. There was once I did a test to determine whether I'm a genius or not and the result is my IQ around 157. It looks like in this life I need to become strong enough to protect my family. compared than the past i have everyone i care about. 

After living 9 years in Uzushiogakure it's a pity that this place will be destroyed in the future, I need to become strong enough to protect Uzumaki Clan and most importantly my parents.

It's awkward to call someone younger than me my parents, they'd get married when they were 18 years old and now they are 25 years old. Mentally I'm 39 years old (30 years old in earth + 9 years old in Naruto world) but because of their unconditional love and care I really love them from the bottom of my heart.

(Yesterday Before I Got The System)

"Son, are you really sure you want to go to Konoha"

"I'm sure Mom, I want to become the strongest shinobi in this world so I can protect our family", I smiled at my mother.

"Why not wait until you become 12 years old, you and Kushina are too young"

"Mother, if I come to Konoha when I'm 12 it will be late. It will be difficult to be friend with other kids and also I heard there are hardly anyone who have red hair other than Uzumaki Clan. So it will be a good idea to come early to Konoha so I can be friends with other kids and they won't look weirdly at me and i know Konoha really wanted Kushina to come early", said me while touching my hair. After giving some thought my mother finally agreed to let me go to Konoha with my sister.

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"System how to enter space or open spatial rift?"

HOST, IT'S EASY YOU JUST NEED TO MOVE YOUR HAND IN AT CIRCULAR MOTION LIKE DOCTOR STRANGE DID AND IMAGINE FROM WHERE TO YOU WANT TO TRAVEL

I did what the system told me and suddenly big golden rift (you can imagine Doctor Strange Rift) opened in front of me. The location is in front of Konoha. I didn't open the rift inside Konoha because I heard they have sensor ninja to detect outsiders, it will be difficult if I intrude without permission. I try to walk inside the rift and now I have arrived in front of Konoha. Before anyone noticed I returned back to Uzushiogakure it would be difficult if anyone noticed my strange ability.

HOST, YOU CAN MARK YOUR TRAVEL DESTINATION FOR CONVENIENCE. IT WILL MAKE OTHERS THINK YOU HAVE SPACE-TIME NINJUTSU THAT NEEDS MARKING FIRST AND IT CAN HELP YOU TO PINPOINT LOCATION ACCURATELY

"Nice, with this I can fool others. If they knew I could open spatial rift anywhere it would be difficult for me if someone wanted to frame me for stealing. System, how to enter the Magical Space?"

HOST, YOU CAN ENTER MAGICAL SPACE WITH 2 WAY. FIRST, BY TELLING THE SPACE YOU WANT TO ENTER, IT WILL AUTOMATICALLY LET YOU ENTER IN THE BLINK OF AN EYE AND SECOND BY OPENING THE RIFT. ONLY THOSE WHOM YOU GIVE PERMISSION CAN ENTER YOUR RIFT OR YOUR SPACE

"What would happen if they tried to enter without I noticing it?"

THEY WOULD BE ELECTROCUTED BY 100000 VOLT OF ELECTRICITY, IF THEIR BODY IS NOT STRONG ENOUGH THE RESULT ARE DEATH

I went inside the magical space and I was amazed by the scenery, even though this is space system but it has greenery space, artifical sun, fresh air and river.

HOST, CURRENTLY THIS PLACE IS 100,000 HECTARES YOU CAN INCREASE THE SIZE BY ADDING THE ITEM THAT DIDN'T EXIST IN THIS PLACE EXAMPLE PLANT LIKE MANGO, CHILI AND. YOU CAN ALSO INCLUDE TAILED BEAST AND THE SPACE SYSTEM WILL GRADE THE TAILED BEAST SSS+ RANK. THERE IS A GAME SYSTEM THAT CAN INCREASE THE LEVEL OF THIS SPACE, IF YOU MANAGED TO MAKE IT LEVEL 2 THERE WILL BE NPC THAT WILL HELP YOU CULTIVATE THE PLANT AND OVERTHERE IS A SPRING WATER THAT CAN STRENGHTEN THE BODY, HEAL, DETOXIFY AND CANCEL ANY JUTSU SUCH AS JUINJUTSU. IF ANYONE DRINK THEY WILL BE SAFE AND MORE HEALTHIER THAN BEFORE

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