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Naruto: Ōtsutsuki lineage

Author: theusual
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A lonely man, lover of manga and anime, travels to the world of Naruto, where ninja life is cruel and is reborn in a family branch of the Hyuga clan, Hyuga Chen, who thought he would die young, received the Ōtsutsuki lineage by opening the system . Chen said: I don't know how much my sword will allow you to run for a year. -------------------------------------------------- --------------- I warn you that the timeline is slightly different. For instance, the dates of important events. If you want to support and read chapters ahead, join my Patreon: patreon.com/Athome790 - - -- --

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What is the name of the original novel??????????

Sieg_44
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To be frank, it's bad, it could be very good if the only thing the system gives is the otsutsuki lineage, but it gives absurd and op things, from the 6th episode it already becomes an untouchable character. The translation is not bad but the story is garbage, classic Chinese ff, if I write ff without using my brain I can write better than 80% of Chinese ff

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Translation is pretty good. There’s some things that aren’t explained like he has a mark on his neck or whatever all of a sudden that wasn’t mentioned before. Since it’s a translation I can’t say much about the story itself and where it’s going, especially because it seems to be slow paced and I didn’t even read all the available chapters yet, but this is gonna be your typical Op mc story that gets various powers for no reason. He’s three years old, has an ancient or pure otsutsuki bloodline, a system that got him pika pika no mi with no weaknesses, observation Haki and rokushiki manual, tenseigan that can supposedly control space and time and it’s all being spoon-fed to him. He’s a branchmember but doesn’t have the seal, because he doesn’t have byakugan but his eyes are described as lavender(with golden colour)?? That’s pretty much how a byakugan looks, sometimes more white sometimes more creamy lavenderish no?! Idk there’s a lot of things not to like already but I don’t find many good naruto fanfictions to read nowadays so I’ll keep reading to kill time

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É raro encontrar boas histórias de Naruto do anime espero que continue postando mais capítulos já que sua história tira o tédio do dia é realmente muito boa 😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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Good novel 5 stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟...............

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Até agora muito bom veremos se continua assim até o final,... . .... .... ... .. . ... . . .,.......................................................................

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The ff is good don't have mistakes even though thw system is kinda sus and makes him overpowered quickly, i mean just give him otsusuki lineage but and some techniques , not the pika pika no mi and all the stuff, overall it's good for time pass

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