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My rebirth is a bit wrong

I'm French, and I use Google Translate, so tell me if you see a bad mistake. Don't beat me in the comment, please. Our protagonist is an IT Developer, One day he goes to the supermarket to get some pasta because his food pantry is empty. When he came back, he makes his curry pasta. He is going to eat them on the rooftop. But then a mysterious, strong wind pushes him from the building into the void. When he was going to hit the ground, he saw the 'God' and his life goes wrong from there…

Deisy · Fantasía
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An unexpected new start

When 'God' finished speaking, our protagonist felt extreme fatigue, his eyes closed little by little.

From the outside world, it can be seen disintegrating into several small particles and then flying upwards to finally disappear into a wormhole that appeared out of nowhere.

'God' who watched this show whispering "Remember, it is nature that decides certain events. Don't blame me if something unfortunate happens." and then disappears while he was turning around.

Our protagonist who did not know what was happening felt like he was sleeping, and in this state he heard very clearly the whisper of 'God' as if the voice came from his being.

In this state, he no longer felt anything, as if his being had come out of his body. He tried to answer at first, but with the strangeness of his body, he knew it was impossible for him to speak. Remembering the methods of communication used in the novels, he replied simply by thinking what he meant, "Thank you, I can't blame you it's better than being reincarnated as a mosquito."

After some time of seeing and feeling nothing, he saw in the distance a cluster of light that grew bigger and bigger, without being able to distinguish what was in the light. After a while, he understood that it was he who was getting closer to the light and not the other way around.

A moment later, which seemed to him an eternity, the light that was once far away was so close that he had the feeling of being swallowed at the slightest advance.

The feeling he had had instead been confirmed after another long time. The light sucked his consciousness and then suddenly nothing, complete darkness.

This time was different from the others, despite the total darkness, he could feel that he was no longer traveling in the void. The body he could no longer feel was felt so lightly that it is not explainable with a simple word. As he felt this connection getting stronger and stronger, he decided to wait a few more moments for the connection to be complete, so he could try to wake up.

As a warmer and warmer current began to manifest itself and finally stopped. He knew internally that the connection was over, he tried to wake up, but it was impossible for him to control a muscle.

What he didn't know was that at the same time around his new 'body' the general panic had set in. There were people running in all directions, screaming and crying.

Trying to understand where the problem came from. He suddenly saw images scrolling, they were clear, but at the same time very blurry, the same for the sound, especially that it seemed of a different language. He understood that it was his birth, but he couldn't feel anything. It's not like what's written in the novels he's read, let alone what 'God' told him after asking him to become aware at the age of 17.

Thinking of this, he understood that these were the memories of the life of his new body. He guessed that it was his birth not because of the environment that does not look like a hospital, but more like a room, even if he did not see very clearly he could make the difference between a room and a clean room. He recognized it in particular by seeing the people around who had giant sizes and that he could hold in the palm of his hand.

A few seconds later, he saw being put back in the arms of the person who was lying on the bed. Distinguishing the woman's figure and long hair, he knew right away that it was his mother. A strange feeling invades him in one fell swoop, a kind of benevolent warmth in the chest.

While he was still bathed in this heat, he heard his mother whispered a few words despite the strong fatigue after giving birth that was visible on his face, "… Luna... Girl ..... Princess."

He distinguished 3 words: Luna, Girl, Princess, which strangely resembles words he has in mind while he feels that it has become very distant. Realizing the importance of the words he just heard, he had, for a split second, a cold sweat that disappeared not without a trace. For he began to doubt whether his memory is really what he experienced and at the same time, he finally understood what 'God' meant when he told him that he could not transfer his character.

Meanwhile, in the outside world, another commotion has surfaced around the 'body' because of this famous cold sweat. The sound of footsteps, the screams and the tears, we resumed more beautiful in the space of a fraction of a second.

Back to our protagonist…

Thinking of the 3 word and his new destiny, our protagonist wanted to curse the so-called 'God' for making such a joke to him. But remaining lucid, he recalled the last whisper he heard about nature deciding certain events.

While remaining optimistic, as always, no matter the situation, our protagonist says with a slight air of resignation that he will have to live a good life… Ha no, rather than she will have to live a good life in this new universe and enjoy the gift that the so-called 'God' has given her.

But suddenly, thinking of his memory on earth, our protagonist began to pray to 'God' by saying kind words and asking, so as not to 'taint his new life totally pure', that many 'details' be set aside to focus on the more important things of his life on earth.

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