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Martial Insanity

Yin Feng a sickly and cowardly Martial artist in the 21st Century that escapes from the harsh reality of his world by retreating to video games where he enjoys cultivation games but due to his job he can't waste time grinding them and just cheats to save himself the hassle but one day while he was enjoying the finale of the game his condition worsens due to his work and he passes away alone and slowly But suddenly his eyes open as he finds himself laying on a hard floor not as himself but rather as his ingame character, this marks the beginning of his journey with no sickness no regrets and a character only made possible with cheats.

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Yin Feng a child of a wealthy Martial arts family that suffers from cancer has lived a life with no meaning.

From his waking hours he drags his body through the day. 10 hours of physical labor with an already weak body.

"You Idiot!" An old man yells .

"Sorry boss i'll do some overtime and finish no need to worry about it haha" a handsome young man with short white hair replies.

He looks skinny and fragile, his bones seem brittle and his breathing is heavy.

"Hmpth! Yin Feng you should just quit already" the old man says with a stern expression.

"haha you shouldn't joke like that boss am your most honest worker" Yin Feng replies jokingly.

"What an idiot!" The old man remarks as he leaves.

"Bitch! what idiot! Your whole family is an idiot! If i don't do this i'll starve" Yin Feng retaliates ferociously. (after making sure the old man is gone)

"What was that?..." a voice replies from outside the warehouse.

"Oh no" says Yin Feng softly knowing this day is going to be a long one.

We see Yin Feng walking and cursing on a dark rainy night with no umbrella "with all that ego one could mistake the stinking old man for an Immortal Emperor" Kicks a stone to the side "Bitch you are an assistant manager! not even a manager Realm Powerhouse yet" he says to himself and chuckles slightly having uplifted his mood.

He enters his appartment and sits down on the computer right away "All Right! Today you will breakthrough and finish this stupid game" Yin Feng says excitedly.

Hours go by and a resounding "FUCK!" Echoes throughout the appartment.

"How could this be! I practiced the law of Lightning to perfection, layed the most stable Foundation possible, picked the Greatest place for a breakthrough and added 3 Formations to support my breakthrough. how could it be that after saving and loading almost a hundred times i couldn't do it" Yin Feng says angrily while pulling his hair.

"Could it be!" Yin Feng remembers a rumor he heard once online that the breakthrough is impossible due to the realm not existing in the game yet.

"Alright you fuckers let's test this once and for all" Yin Feng says with a determined look.

He creates a new character but this time he activates cheats saying "lets do it like this then Spiritual Roots Max!, Comprehension Max!, Talents let's do these two, Background...." he thinks for a minute picks something then says "let's make it a little interes....." his voice halts and he drops to the floor falling out of his chair.

"What's going on?" He mutters painfully as he realizes his condition is acting out again then reaches out to his phone quickly he starts calling the police out of panic and informs them of the situation.

"We will send an Ambulance your way as quickly as possible" they respond calmly.

He lays on the ground and starts realizing he is not making it and a burst of emotions go through him he stares at his phone and decides to call his family.

Maybe he should make amends he thinks.

No reply "...."

"Shit..."

He calls again dialing a different number, this time it's his ex girlfriend.

"Hello?" A gentle feminine voice replies.

"Hi it's Yin Feng, this is my new number, I called to apolo" she cuts him off saying "Hah! You must've seen my new pictures with lin and came crying right!".

Yin Feng: huh... what pictures. He thinks trying to remember

He in fact did not see those posts or any other post she made, why would anyone do that it's so pathetic.

A masculine voice intervenes clearly trying to sound more masculine than normal "WHO IS THAT!".

Yin Feng realizing the situation quickly decides his last act on this Earth will atleast be a fun one.

"Esteemed master lin!" Yin Feng shouts in a sickly tone.

"Huh..?" In a masculine voice.

"Huh..?"in a feminine voice.

Yin Feng continues "I am dying right now my soul is leaving my body as we speak so please heed my words of warning!".

"What words of warning...?" The masculine voice replies.

"She is a devil that will ruin your life, why do you think i broke up with her" Yin Feng notes and asks.

"What are you talking about?" the supposed lin replies.

"Ten! Black Men!" Yin Feng shouts and with his last Breaths says "I leave the rest to your judgment".

The phone drops and on the other side a feminine voice could be heard "Wait! Father i swear he is lying!" *Smack* a resounding impact is heard and then the call ends.

"Father huh.... did i miscalculate or did their relationship develop so far already?" Yin Feng thinks as he no longer feels anything but coldness throughout his body.

And he just closes his eyes with a chuckle yet tears drop from his eyes conflicted and unsure his life ends just the same.

It was at this moment that he wished he would have acted like this more. Free and unrestrained not having to worry about consequences, just living in the moment.

The suddenly something changes

"Huh the coldness is gone" Yin Feng says.

He openes his eyes and finds himself in a cave with Six stones emanating light embedded at the ceiling, A series of Sword and Fist maneuvers is recorded on the walls and a old man skinny to the point where you can see his ribcage through his clothes is sitting in a Lotus position in front of Yin Feng.

"You are finally awake child" the old man says.

Yin Feng stares in shock for a minute before he says "is this the hospital?".

The old man tilts his head to the side and replies "enough of your jokes, I've taught you all i could wether you keep your promise is your fate, young man your future is bright don't squander it and when you meet your Senior brothers, Give them a harsh beating in my stead." Before closing his eyes and letting out one final breath.

Yin Feng replies "What are you tal-" and then suddenly memories flash through his head carrying with them an immense amount of pain.

"AAAAGH!" Yin Feng falls to the ground and lays there for a minute before getting his bearings back.

"This is..... this is Tales Of Conquest!" Suddenly Yin Feng Realizes and shouts the name of the game.

He stares towards the old man who has turned silent and looks at the cave saying "isn't this The Spirit of Vengeance Background doesn't that mean" a creepy smile takes over as Yin Feng realizes

Then he shouts "Characters Status!"

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■Character name : Yin Feng

■Faction: Immortal Yin Clan (Outcast)

■Cultivation: Body Training Stage (1)

■Titles/Reputation: Outcast of the Yin/Inheritor of the White Phantom/1200

■Age/Lifespan: 9/60

■Spiritual Root: Potential 10th Grade Divine Root (Unawakened)

■Comprehension: Divine (200)

■Talents: Innate Yin Yang Constitution, All-Seeing Eye of Mystery, Divine Insight, Heavenly Blessings(Unawakened).

■Skills: White Void Palm Arts Spiritual Grade (High) - Seven Phantoms Light Stride Spiritual Grade (Peak)

■Inventory: 2×Mystery Chest (Immortal Grade) - White Silk Robes 3rd Grade Mid (Epic).

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