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Journey of an Overcomer

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Chapter 10

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The sound of the wind

Goes through beyond my body,

As though the whisper of the devils

Knocking the wall I built over these thousands of years.

The mask of lies

Restrained my wings

To fly in the beautiful night sky

Wishing I could free

I was freed from the mask of myself

It got me addicted spreading my damage wings,

As I healed through this entire time,

I soar so high in the night sky,

The moonlight gave me a shiver down in my spine

Cold yet comforting,

I rested as I have tasted my full freedom

Waiting my time to end...

Albeit journeying through this land,

Seeking all the things I want,

But neverthless,

You'll still be the only one I want

No matter what time,

Infinitely, I'm yours forever.

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You have a solid start. I want to give some tips but I am not an expert write so this is just what I think. First, I understand that English in not your native language. If you get some free-time I would recommend that you improve your English. But don't worry there is a lot you can do to make your novel better. You use too many (he) . He stepped back, He did this, He did that. etc.. I would use the MC name more because it is confusing if you use He all the time. Also the sentences are really short because of this. You can still use "he" just less. Second, I think you should clarify what you mean by "Other-half". Are you referring to the person that used to have his new body? What is the name of that person? Why isnt his brothers, Grandpa calling by his name? How did he know what everything was in this new world? Third, I do not think it is a good Idea to give the system a name. It feels weird when he calls system Jack. I keep thinking Jack is a person and not the system. Also when you are switching people in dialogue use a line break. Like when Jack and Ji is speaking. It is confusing to figure out who said what. Also take it slow. He is in another world. I think you should spend some more time to understand this new world and describe everything. He is already trying to build a shop? All in all, I think you are making a great effort. Writing skill is something everybody needs to work hard to develop. You have taken step one so keep at it. P.S: If you are having a hard time with world building then why not write a fan-fiction? Many writers start with fan-fictions because it is easier to practice. Just pick you favorite novel and write in that world. This is just my humble opinion. I am not an expert.

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