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I Can Create Avatars

After getting involved with something that science could not explain, Benjamin is given another chance at life as Liam, a normal human in a universe that has numerous habitable planets and different human factions. Granted with the ability to create avatars and use them as extra bodies, Liam makes it his goal to slowly climb up the power ladder and stand at the top in a universe where both personal power and laws were of high importance for survival. Sharing the powers of this avatars with his main body, Liam plans to slowly but surely push away all the obstacles in his path to becoming the strongest, not because it was his final goal, but because that was the only way to life a leisure life in a universe like that. A/N: Yes, this is a harem novel. But, it will be small and I want to flesh out my characters, so I'll be taking my time with this part. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the reviews.

PsionicMind · Fantasía
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110 Chs

Family Time

Sure, here is the edited version of your chapter for punctuation and sentence structure:

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Liam opened his eyes, not knowing how much time had passed since he had passed out. He looked down to see his left hand missing, as there was only a stump left. Light passed through the windows, showing that it was daytime.

With a heavy sigh, he sat up and brought his only arm towards his chest, pressing lightly before wincing. "Yeah, I'll need some time to recover."

He then looked at the doorway. "Anyone outside?"

A second after his shout, a man walked in. "Yes, general!"

"Can you ask Master Gotah to come here, please? Same with my family."

With a slight nod, the man left Liam alone. Liam pushed himself backwards until his back touched the wall. Leaning against it, he sighed again before slapping himself.