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I’m NARUTO?!?!??!?!

Autor: Mirmirb1
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I didn’t sacrifice my life to create the Heavens in order for Gods to fight and dispute ownership over it in order to become the ‘King of Gods’ When I was alive, just the fact that I existed was enough to keep Gods and Demons at bay. But when I died, my fragile hand at peace to the multiverse broke. Ten Million Years may have passed, but now I’ve returned. I don’t care if there are dozens of God Kings or even if there is a God of Gods now. I’m done with trying to keep the peace in life so passively. Now, it’s the time for Judgement Day to arrive for each and every single individual that dared to start a Universe Wide War for the wrong reasons. After all, if I were to allow the chaos and disorder to run unhinged and with no stopper, then how can I call myself the God of Balance? - Alternate synopsis - I didn’t create the Heavens for the corrupted Gods to fight over it and mark the territory as its own. The Heavens was a defence system I created so that less and less incompetent and vile beings ascended into divinity and gain their own control over a Property. I may of died once after the creation of Heaven, but I’m back now and with the Property of Balance, I, the First One who Ascended to Divinity, will put those incompetent and vile beings in line and once ===== Prologue is a bit bland and a info dump... Updates are going to be random because I do have higher priorities than writing. Thanks for understanding :) Please read ten chapters before writing a review, even if the review is going to be good. I welcome Idea's and feedback on how to make my novel better, so don't hesitate to tell me!

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daijahlbias2005
daijahlbias2005Lv1daijahlbias2005

Great book so far definitely recommend. If you watched Naruto then you understand if not then that’s your loss. But anyways I really like this book y’all should definitely read.

Mirmirb1
Mirmirb1AutorMirmirb1

Stop reading this start reading the book go try it out rate the chapter and give spirit stones🥰😍🥰😍🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Schnee_
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Revela spoiler

Mirmirb1
Mirmirb1AutorMirmirb1

This my first book and it’s not as easy as look I wrote like a lot of words and apparently it was only 15 pages like dang but yeah check it out and support and give suggestions

Poke_verse
Poke_verseLv1Poke_verse

I've only read up to the 1st chapter. From what I read so far it should be a good book. Anyway, 5 stars from me, read on if you wanna.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

The author of this story is new to writing. I can only deduce that he is also very very young. The grammar in this story, lack of punctuation, walls of text and chaotic writing is worse than the majority of authors who get their fic dropped due to the terrible formatting and grammar they used. Which is why I drop it as well. The story simply isn't legible with the complete lack of formatting, grammar and paragraphs. I unfortunately cannot accurately rate the quality of the story because I simply could not read it due to how it was written... To the author... I encourage you to keep on writing but do so to work on these issues. Writing out your stories is a great way to practice your writing skills but you do need to do your best to format your text as you write it. Each sentence should end with a symbol. Question marks for questions, exclamation marks for yelling, points... For breaks and a single point to end a sentence. Don't group more than three sentences in a single paragraph. If you do, your text is not legible to people with dyslexia. Don't shorten your words to slang like sum for something. Very few people outside the sphere of influence that you are in will make such a connection. Storytelling / Writing is an international. It pans across generations. As such it pays to put the effort into making it legible for all. I'm a millennial, your probably one of the next gen kids judging by how you use your words: work this and your story will be lit. Sincerely, Canaan

LokiMaster
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Revela spoiler

katorishi
katorishiLv5katorishi

the chapters are short grammar alright. the gems of this story are story and interactions. I would like to tell the author please use " when a character is talking, other than that even though you have a good story I like it.😉😊

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

It was starting as a good story but the thing is that: *There are no space between lines *Too fast of a conversation in which I don't know if it's naruto talking or another person * First thing MC did was quite rushed . I quit to read any more of this novel

Monkkey97
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Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Hurm, it have a good concept... Not something rare but enough to be uncommon. I think the part you can fix immediately is the paragraph. You could cut it into more paragraph so people wouldn't have to read a whole page of compact text that will make reader unconsciously feel like it's too much text and a bit messy. Then you should also let it 'breath'. When I read your fanfiction, it's like I need one breath to read everything in one go or something will lose... You can also use symbols more. Separate the speech from other sentence so it give us a feeling of its a dialogue instead of another normal sentence...

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