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Hate system

Not too sure on how to start the story. Basically it's about a guy who died and transmigrated as a villan in a magical world with demons and a level system. (How original ¯\_(シ)_/¯) He will do different things than what other villains did, probably. I don't know if it's already been used. It has been years soo...yeah. Enjoy!

jonny_dangerous · Fantasía
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Chapter 3

Shen Tian started panicking and sputtered, "I-I'm fine. I just fell down Leng Qianxue." His body started shivering in fear, and he remembered all the painful training he (old Shen) went through.

"I see. Anyway, it's time for your magic lessons now. Meet me downstairs in 15 minutes, master." Leng Qianxue informed him.

"Of course, I'll be down soon." He bit his lip and looked back at the store for anything to help with the pain he'll go through. He put points into his stats and hoped it would he enough for him to survive.

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{Status}

Shen Tian

Level 1

HP 300

MP 300

-Strength: 10+40= 50

-Constitution: 10+40= 50

-Dexterity: 10+ 30= 40

-Intelligence: 10+20= 30

-Wisdom: 10+20= 30

-Charisma: 10+20= 30

-Stat points: 0

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She stared at the doorway confused, Shen Tian would usually make excuses not to go out, but he agreed Instantly. She narrowed her eyes and hummed to herself. She started walking down to the basement and waited in the training room.

15 minutes later, Shen Tian hesitantly walked down the steps, and he gulped at the sight of Leng Qianxue. She's standing there with a neutral look on her face.

She has her hair in a ponytail, a dark blue sports bra with shorts, and comfy shoes. Any other time, such a sight would arouse him, but it took a backseat to his fear of her.

If anyone else saw her, they would assume she's bored, but from Shen Tian's memories, she's a fierce tigress waiting for the perfect chance to pounce and devour the unsuspecting prey.

When Tian stepped in front of her, he raised his arms in a basic boxer's stance. He waited for her to start the lesson.

"Good, now let's review what you learned while we spar," Leng Qianxue said, going in the same stance.

"To use magic, we need to chant for the spell to work and visualize it. If we don't, it won't wo, guh," I stopped when she pounced and gut-punched me. She stepped back, dodging my kick to her shin. I jumped back to give myself room to start chanting my spell.

"Oh goddess of water, Neasis, please bless this servant with," but before he could finish, Leng Qianxue arrived behind him.

"Too slow," She said grabbing his arm, pushing him to the ground. "You need to chant faster. Your enemies won't wait for you to finish." She put pressure on his back, pulling back one of his arms and forcing his other arm to stay under him.

"Ugh, f-fi," He strained to say through the pain. All he needed was a moment for his arm to get loose. He started wiggling it.

"Hmm?" She looked a little confused on why he didn't tap out yet. Usually, he would give up by now, but before she could think more on this, she felt the temperature raise slightly.

"F-fir-fireball!" Shen Tain said at last and a small ball of fire formed in his hand and shot towards her growing bigger.

Leng Qianxue raised an eyebrow, a little impressed that he could chant through the pain, but she counter chanted, "Oh goddess Neria, water barrier."

A barrier of water appeared and blocked the fireball, creating steam surrounding them. "Nice try, but usele- ahmm!" She began but moaned when Shen Tian used an underhanded sneak attack.

Leng Qianxue reflexively let go of his arm to cover up her chest from his hands.

Shen Tian rolled away and stopped on his knees, rotating his arm. He started sweating heavily when he felt the murderous intent coming from Leng Qianxue. [+150 HP, 200HP...]

"C-co-come on now, t-teach, you said to use whatever w-we need to escape a-and I did." He said stuttering getting up from the floor and slowly moving backwards.

She was about to let it go, but what he said next sealed his fate, "Besides, it's not like I enjoyed touching someone so old like you."

[+450,+500+550+1000 HP...]

Leng Qianxue paused barely a second and she disappeared completely. When she reappeared, she was behind him and grabbed his hair in a vice like grip. "WHAT WAS THAT!?!!!

At that moment, he knew he fucked up. He fucked up bad. His cries of mercy was heard throughout the mansion making people thing there's a wailing ghost with how it screamed in anguish.

Not that good at fighting scenes sorry about that.

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