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Gods Pity

This Story follows the life of Kiran Ren an 18 year old boy who led a pitiful life. His parents died when he was young, he was bullied in school because of his impoverished disposition, and he was utterly alone. After being killed in a world ending disaster he was brought to purgatory, where his life experience was judged to be pitiful. invoking the pity of the gods causing him to be reincarnated into a similar but different world than he was used to. A world where humans have discovered a way to awaken special and unique powers to combat monsters that roam the lands of earth and in the far expanses of earth where different civilized races have been found, some friend and some for. This is my first time writing anything like this, so criticism, feedback, and suggestions are welcome and encouraged. I hope you enjoy Kiran's journey to not only become stronger and get revenge on those who crossed him in the past, but to also find himself and form bonds on the way.

Vulkan · Fantasía
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The End

It was the 6th of March in the year 2027, on board the fifth commercial space flight taking regular citizens on a tour of the stars. Sitting in the cafeteria was Kiran an 18 year old boy who was about to finish high school and didn't know what to do with his life. He had gone on this space flight to get some clarity about what he was going to do in the future. "Do you want to know something", a young boy sitting next to Kiran asked. Before Kiran could even reply the young boy had gone on to say, "If the sun was to explode right now it would take about 5 minutes for it to effect the earth" thinking this was a bit of a morbid thing for someone to say while aboard a spaceship, Kiran ignored the kid and decided to return to his room to get some much needed rest.

Looking out the window of his room, he observed how minuscule the earth looked in comparison to the great expanse known as space and how pitiful it was. Kiran sympathized in that his life had been nothing more than pitiful. His parents died in war when he was very young, causing him to be thrown into the foster care system, moving from household to household with no one to properly care for him. In school he was picked on and no one wanted to be around him; this wasn't because he was dumb, fat, or ugly. Kiran was actually quite handsome and was in good shape with an IQ that would qualify him as a genius; however all of this was obscured from the sight of people by his impoverished disposition and lifestyle.

With a long sigh Kiran fell into a deep slumber.

Beep! Beep! Beep! All Passengers Return To Your Rooms And Wait For An Update On The Situation!

Suddenly awoken by blaring sirens, Kiran was in a daze and confused on what was going on. Looking out his window he was stunned, he saw that the earth had changed from the lonely blue and green orb in a sea of debris into a red and black wasteland that seemed uninhabitable. Overcome with feelings of horror and doubt, Kiran disregarded the announcement rushing out of his room towards the captain's cabin. The captain of the shuttle had been a close friend to his father before he died, this was the reason Kiran was even able to join this tour.

When he went into the Captain's cabin he found a middle aged man panicking as he was desperately searching through the huge terminal that guided the ship on its way. Kiran trying to calm himself down went up to the captain asking what was going on. Only after repeating himself 3 times did the Captain hear him only saying, "The pressure and temperature outside the ship has risen an astronomical amount, but I have no idea what could have caused…" Cut off by a huge burst of light coming from the window followed by a large boom, both Kiran and the Captain were gasping as they looked out the window, the pair were horrified to see a empty space where the sun used to be with beam of fire, pieces of planets and asteroids flying in their direction.

In about 30 seconds the rubble had reached the spaceship, causing Kiran to think to himself, "I guess that kid was wrong". A huge bang could be heard, the master computer suddenly cracked and a piece of rubble broke through from the outside, causing a monstrous whole in the captain's cabin. Kiran, filled with fear, suddenly had his vision go black.

Kiran, age 17 - deceased.

This is my first time writing anything like this, so don't be afraid to be brutal with criticism and any advice is welcome. Thank you for reading and I hope you stick around.

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