Game of Thrones : Nano Machines

This novel is just authors bashing, nothing makes sense. Not a single character is behaving not even close to their personality. The power-ups are meaningless, and makes 0 sense. Its just a fast paced, 0 plot wish fullfilling rushed draft. Author is traying to make a BAMF Jon Snow, but all he managed is a angry bull, with 0 control. Dialogue is vague, fake and dry. No emotions are felt, despite the CAPS, that is not how you create emotions. The number of things wrong here, is endless.

Ok, Daenerys bashing, all this opness. Wish fulfillment+ useless....gonna read it just cuz, nothing else atm. It's like " f,,,,last woman on Earth situation". Robb tried to poison Jon, which the character would never do. The only reason that happent, was because Author did not wanted to get MC a reason to either go into war or help/save Robb. Daenerys is bashed hard, just cause, forgetting the writers sucked+ rushed ending.

the story's got a good idea but the delivery is so bad. The author has given no thought to the behaviour of established characters that it almost hurts reading it

Love it, great writer, nice face pace. Could you please do a vampire diaries or originals fanfiction please

nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow. nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow. nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow

Super Fanfictions. Aussi bien celle ci que les autres. Je ne suis pas un grand FAN de ce monde (GOT), mais j'apprécie ton travail. J'attends la suite !!

I've reached 23 chapters, but unfortunately I can't take it anymore. the conversations are too bland, not showing the characters' feelings at all. Jon Snow is too bull. Arrogance is fine, but being too arrogant doesn't make him good at all, he actually looks like a literal villain.

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this novel is a treasure taken out from a treasure chest i hope the author continue this and not dropped this one it's really really good 👍

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honestly I love what you're doing if I should give a review it's that I think you went a little fast but otherwise I really like it and I can't wait for the next chapters to arrive. CONTINUE

I really like the premise of the story. Thanks! ........,.......... ...........................................................................,.......,...

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