A New Journy

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"Error Registered. The Fate System has been compromised, attempting to shut down." A robotic female voice resonated in a white void, the sound emanating from an entity that lacked form.

In its attempt to shut down the systems, another voice commanded, "Do not shut it down; allow it."

The voice belonged to another female, but it was clearer and more stern, exuding an aura of wisdom and charisma.

"Mother! Understood," responded the robotic voice.

"Don't worry, my child. I understand that you are confused as to why I would order you to stop," spoke the older voice.

"Yes, Mother. According to the rules, this system should be shut down and erased," replied the robotic voice.

"Indeed, but that was meant to prevent people from using external means to break the system. This system was broken from the inside, by its own user's willpower," explained the older voice.

"I don't see how this is different. The system was broken, regardless of the means," replied the robotic voice, confused.

"The whole reason I made these systems was so they could be broken, but not from the outside. Rather, from the inside, by the user's willpower. This system shouldn't be shut down; instead, it should be monitored further and studied. The future of the world is at stake."

...

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU CAN'T SAVE HIM!" screamed Raven, looking towards Batman.

"The Gate is unstable. Opening it now will only suck us inside of it. The Phantom Zone is a very dangerous place, and opening it from the inside is pretty much impossible," replied Batman.

"Let me go after him, just me. You can close it afterwards!" replied Raven, appealing to Batman to reconsider his decision not to open the gate again.

"No, I can't risk your life too!" said Batman.

"Then you're just going to give up on him! After all he's done! He has saved all our lives!" screamed Raven at Batman.

"He killed a man! He is a murderer now! He's committed a crime! He's not even a hero anymore," screamed Superman back, clearly angry. He was very enraged to find out Doomsday was alive and wasn't in a good mood.

"He's more of a hero than all of you!" replied Raven with bitterness in her mouth. Angered, she walked away.

Megan tried to stop her but decided not to. Robin, on the other hand, turned to Batman and said, "If that had been me or Connor, would you not have looked for us? Would you not try to save us?"

"The work we do is dangerous. There are risks, risks that we all take and know of," said Batman.

"Yeah, risks. If that was Superman in there, you would move mountains to save him. You only care about what benefits you, and Raiden was a threat," said Robin as he too turned to leave.

"You BOTH should be ashamed of yourselves," said Wonder Woman as she looked at Superman and Batman. She too turned to leave.

"Dinah, take care of them," spoke Batman.

"Yeah, right. You mess things up and expect me to magically fix it. If we don't find Raiden pretty quickly, this team might crumble."

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"Where am I?" spoke Raiden. He opened his eyes, and it started hurting. The place was like a rainbow, but it was dark, too bright.

Raiden was confused.

He looked around. There was nothing. It was confusing!

Too confusing!

Where's up, where's down? Where's left and where is right?

It was jarring, felt like he was suffocating deep in water, but he could breathe easily. He felt in control of his body but couldn't move.

"WHAT THE HECK?"

'Master, you don't have much time. Use my noble phantasm once more. This will hurt you, but you don't have a choice! This place, it's a prison! The worst of its kind,' spoke Edmond.

"Ugh, what?"

'MY NOBLE PHANTASM NOW.'

"Ugh, fine.

Enfer Château d'If."

Bright light was invoked from inside his body as some sort of gate opened up and saved him from the Phantom Zone.

'I had a mentor in my past life. Abbé Faria...

I felt like I was that to you today, Master. You and I… I don't understand it, but I feel connected to you.'

{Bond Increased!

Edmond Dantès Bond 1 → Bond 7}

{Host can choose an active skill:

Determination of Steel EX

Golden Rule A

Wisdom from Desperation A}

Without any hesitation, Raiden picked {Determination of Steel EX}. He knew that this was his missing piece, the way to decrease his cooldown between servants.

{Determination of Steel EX: The dynamism and mind of steel of the man who walked the path of revenge through his life after breaking out of Chateau d'If, the prison said to be hell on earth. A complete blocking of his sense of pain, resulting in a superhuman mind and body that can endure even super-high-speed action}

In Raiden's case, the super-high-speed action was his body's transformation from a servant to another. With this skill, his body would be able to endure it much more.

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"Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh," Raiden woke up. He took a deep breath and then laid back on the bed. It wasn't comfortable, but he felt happy. He not only achieved his goal by enacting his revenge, but he was also now free to leave the Justice League. All he had to do was go bring Raven with him.

"X'HAL! KANA KALOLO KAMIRO NYANDIR!"

Raiden looked to his right. There he saw a child, a very different one. The child looked like she was eight, but what was special to Raiden was her golden skin and her voice that clearly spoke a language he never heard of.

The door to the right opened. A woman in her late twenties walked in, looking exactly like the child and having gold skin as well.

"X'HAL! KARORO! KILARO KAMIRO!" The woman was clearly shocked to see Raiden awake as she grabbed her daughter and hid her behind her, looking at Raiden with a bit of fear.

"KAMIRO! NOKORO NO PARU," spoke the woman as she looked at Raiden with a stern look, as if she was warning him.

"I don't... I don't understand. Please don't be mad! I'm not dangerous!" spoke Raiden as he raised his hand, believing that to be the universal language of peace.

After looking at Raiden for a few seconds, the woman walked towards him, very carefully. She then looked at him for a bit before shocking him with a kiss.

It was a short ten-second kiss, but it was Raiden's best kissing experience. He and Raven weren't exactly professional.

"Whoa! That was unexpected, welcomed but unexpected," said Raiden.

"STRANGER! Do you work with the Invaders! The Citadel!" spoke the woman.

"Huh? Invaders? Citadel? What are you talking about? Why did you even kiss me! WAIT, why are you speaking English now!" said Raiden, excited, shocked

, and confused.

"By the name of X'hal! You're not with them! Good. As for the kissing, it's how my race learns languages! That's why I kissed you. My apologies. If what you say is true, then there is no need for me to be angry. However, can you tell me where you're from?" asked the woman.

"Where I'm from? I guess Coast City?" replied Raiden.

"Coast City?" The woman looked at him with confusion.

"Oh, I see. I get it now. WHAT THE FUCK.....! Did I leave the planet accidentally?!" said Raiden as he grabbed his hair. He then looked at the woman, sighed, and said

"My apologies as well. I guess I look weird to you. My name is Raiden Kagawa, and I'm from the planet Earth. I don't know how far it is or even how to go back, so I would appreciate your help very much!" said Raiden, hoping to be welcomed.

"Ah, welcome Raiden Kagawa! I'm Noriand'r, and this is my daughter, Kariand'r! Welcome to Tameran."

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