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Dragon Ball Time Patrol: Universal Destruction

Just a story involving the Time Patrol and the many problems that come along with being a time patroller! this story is on pause until I'm done re writing the whole thing for now. Go Check out the remake I just dropped if you enjoyed this story its called Dragon Ball: Dimension Distortion. This is one of my first works so i hope you're patient with it and enjoy my work! PS: Please enjoy the story!, also don't be afraid to comment on how the story could be better ill take any ideas! Be sure to check out the second part of this story! Dragon ball Multiverse: Legacy! leave a review if you enjoy! Their also isn't just one Definitive MC! Be Sure to leave a review i take all types of Criticism weather it be good or bad! There are some Extra Chapters! They include, Expert missions Lost missions Story Quest Missions Side Missions or Comedic Relief The Past As always Enjoy the Story!

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God Ki Training?

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Chranoa sent me to a dimension that felt like it was collapsing my lungs and i couldent move at all. I calmed down and lowered my ki and i was able to move again, i was alone in this space and none was around. I transformed into a Super Sayian 4 and began my training to obtain god ki. Chranoa told me that i could stay in here for as long as i needed to one year is one day outside much like the Hyperbolic Time Chamber.

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