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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Teen Saiyan (33)

Broly looked at his mirror dumbfounded.

Opposite him was a two hundred and twenty-two-centimetre monster. His muscles had swelled over the last month, each section seemingly out of a textbook, he was able to clearly define and label them simply due to their huge proportion. Broly saw a sharp curve, his wide shoulders waving inward towards his pillar-like waist that followed straight down to chiselled legs.

"I look kinda scary..." Broly said almost intimidated by his reflection. Paragus had told him Saiyans did all their growing at once but hearing and seeing were two completely separate things. Anyone who said, someone, would grow over three feet in a month was a madman. The strangest part was that prior to growing so much, Broly had felt completely normal.

"Saiyan biology truly is a mystery"

Broly was wearing Mushro's present for his 16th birthday, he was completely shirtless revealing probably the biggest six-pack Broly had ever seen, wide sections of meat seamlessly forming to reveal kilograms of hard muscle. He wore thin waist-tight baggy pants that were white and tucked into his custom-made shoes. A crimson red sash that was upheld by a single golden belt with a cerulean crystal orb in the centre was adorned on Broly's waist. He still had the white arm guards on his wrists and leg guards on his legs.

Broly for the last 4 years was locked in a merciless battle with his hair.

Naturally, it just wanted to drape downwards but Celery had scolded him many times on how messy and savage he looked. Right now several bangs curled down at the sides of Broly's face, the rest of his hair stood high, defying gravity is it pierced upwards.

'It's not going to get any better than that' Broly sighed before leaving his room.

Broly had grown up around short people his whole life and while he didn't hate being tall, it was nothing more than a hindrance especially in communal areas.

Broly walked around his house searching for his father, checking the swimming pool, kitchen, living room, movie room, library, basement, attic and even the training room.

'He must have gone to the royal training facility'

Although Broly had a training room in his house, it only had the basic weights and machines. The royal training facility used gravity technology and advanced machinery to simulate higher intensity environments.

This was how Mushro was able to overtake Paragus in battle power and since he had been training like crazy in those rooms.

'I guess I'll pay him a visit' Broly said leaving his house, surrounding his body in bright green ki.

Broly had just sat his Robotics and Mathematics placement tests and as he had already completed the Compulsory General Advanced Education course, for the first time in his life he had a sudden spike of free-time. Usually, he'd spend time either playing Superstar Fighterz, making upgrades on Mr Yellow or practising ki control, now he suddenly felt like going to the gym.

Broly's body due to the strange composition of his ki was always under a form of stress. It was because of this stress that Broly's muscles had become so developed as the ki inside of him always pressured them. This strange circumstance would have been many times more severe if the bottomless pits of ki that were in his arm guards and leg guards were trapped in his body.

'The Tsufurias though really overcomplicated the matter though' Broly thought as he flew through the air.

There was an extremely simple solution. If Broly had simply threw massive orbs of ki into space there would have been no build up in his body. He could have literally released his ki harmlessly and there would have been absolutely no need for the arm or leg guards.

'Even though it's not sustainable it's still a solution' Broly though as he arrived in Tuffle Queen Palace.

Broly walked into the building and approached the receptionist.

"B-Broly? Is that you? Look how big you've gotten!" the woman said, dropping her pen as she saw him walk through the doors.

"Good Morning Mrs Engine," Broly said, awkwardly accepting her compliments.

"You're father and uncle are on the seventh floor down, don't hurt yourself those huge weights you hear me?" Mrs Engine said, resuming taking notes and typing rapidly on her computer.

"Y-Yes Mrs Engine," Broly said politely.

It was kind of funny how easy to figure out the Saiyans were.

Broly entered the elevator, strolling past the Guard Hatchiyaks who were his size.

'I could take them in a fight' he thought as he pressed the "-7" button and elevator moved down.

"Hmph! Hmph! Hmph!"

"Grrr! Grrr! Grrr!"

Wild grunts could be heard as Paragus and Mushro went down and up their big bodies being held by one hand each as they did press-ups.

Broly took a step forward, not wanting to disrupt his father who was busy training and he felt a wave of force assault him.

'Five? No six times gravity'

Broly muscles tingled as they supported him against the strong force that was repelling him, he walked past Mushro and Paragus who were having a stamina competition and made his way to the Agility Chamber.

He stood in the centre of the white room and filled his body with chaotic disruptive ki.

"Difficulty 10, elastic balls, charged walls, -60 degrees celsius," Broly said, setting the room to max difficulty.

The room immediately began to freeze, Broly's breath condensing and falling to the floor. The walls began to shimmer as their surface was covered in clear white ki and a hundred bright blue balls were ejected out of the walls flying randomly and dangerously.

"Let's get started!" Broly said excitedly as his ki tingled in his fingertips.

"Medium Barrier!" he said softly as thick, viscous rivers of ki poured out and formed a sphere that completely protected his body.

PAT!

PAT!

PAT!

The balls bounced off of Broly's barrier quickly, forcefully flying off the walls at speeds Broly was barely able to see.

"Light Meteor Shower!"

Ki blasted out of Broly's barrier, hitting the walls and balls sending the entire room into disarray, the sheer momentum knocking the balls off course and colliding with the walls. The balls lost their white colour and hummed green, absorbing Broly's ki.

Broly deactivated his barrier and a small smile came on his face as he focused on dodging the balls that raced towards him from the edge of the room, his bracelets sucked the remaining ki so he was only working with his body and honing his instincts.

Looking from the outside in, especially considering Broly's size, it seemed nearly impossible for Broly to dodge all the balls that flew towards him. However, this wasn't the case, Broly just had to move his body in a very specific order and he would be able to get past all of them.

'Although Dr Limiter dismissed my essay on 'Dodge Theory', if I train my ability to dodge an object from each and every angle I could become untouchable. Although it may seem, something could attack me from an infinite number of angles as the volume of my body is fixed so is the number of viable attack pathways' Broly's heart thumped at the prospect.

Broly leapt forward twisting his body as it cut through the air, narrowly missing the balls and turned around just to see them all collide where it previously was and explode strongly spiralling into all directions.

'As much as I just want to focus on what is in front of me, I have to consider every ball in the room,' Broly said decisively, tilting his head as ball collided with the wall behind him.

"Let's go!"

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