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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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"Mr Yellow, send the ship onto a far-away section of the planet"

"Yes, sir!"

Queen Vegeta and Broly flew out of the open ship, fully decked out in armour as they overlooked the planet, their auras strong and controlled in Super Saiyan.

"Are you ready?" Broly asked, tightening his fists.

Queen Vegeta's eyes turned cold.

"He's as good as dead," she said bitterly.

Broly looked down on the Planet, watching soldiers depart from their ships and bring in deliveries into the main building, several of them performing military exercises while others marched from A to B.

"Let's go!"

Broly and Hanasia flew down, appearing like asteroids in the sky, soaring down towards the ground at breakneck speed, sure to wreak havoc.

"FIRE!"

The military base was on high alert after the announcement of the destruction of the surrounding planets, when they detected a disturbance in the sky, they didn't hesitate.

A thin beam of concentrated ki shot through.

Hanasia scoffed.

She leaned mid-air and flew towards the beam, smacking it down towards the ground where it skimmed the land and grazed the air, flying into the horizon.

Broly raised an eyebrow, unsure of why she missed out on the opportunity to harm them with their own weapons.

"I want to kill each of them with my end to hands," she said coldly.

Broly's expression hardened, understanding Queen Vegeta's point of view and realising these people couldn't be shown mercy.

WSH!

Wind bathed the land at their feet before they hovered over the ground, landing with a slight sound.

"Who the fuck are you people?" a soldier questioned, his gun already raised.

Hanasia seemed to snap, her blood boiling but she looked back at Broly, waiting for his command.

"Go ahead," he said simply.

A wicked smile grew on Hanasia's face as she darted towards the soldier.

"What the-"

Hanasia disappeared in his line of sight before reappearing, sending a crushing kick to his head, wiping it clean off and sending it crashing into the head of another soldier, concussing him on impact.

"Wha-"

"No way!"

"Fire!"

The soldier's who were already on high alert hastily aimed their ki rifles at the Saiyans, blasting them as soon as they could while others charged them.

"I've got these few"

Broly flashed forward and swiped his hand powerfully, his fists blurring green as his powered hand cut through his opponents beheading them instantly.

PEW! PEW! PEW!

Many ki beams smashed into Broly's chest uselessly, being absorbed by the armour as he scowled at the soldiers firing in front of the base.

"Scum!"

He jumped forward, attempting to punch one of them but his hand squished the head in impact, liquifying the brain of his enemy immediately. Broly recoiled, still slightly off-put by the sensation but steeled himself.

'How many people have these men killed?'

Queen Vegeta didn't wait for Broly's permission anymore and didn't show anywhere near as much hesitancy, pouncing from opponent to opponent in seconds, cleaving through their bodies with mere swipes.

Broly watched her move, steeling himself mentally.

"Hey! What the fuck is going on over here?"

"Who are you?"

"Fire!"

More soldiers had come from inside and circled around the building to the front to see what the commotion was only to see several soldiers shaking in fear while others were completely headless, still standing before crumpling weakly.

Broly flashed again.

"My neck!"

"My collar bone!"

"My septum!"

"My sternum!"

The soldiers blinked only to find several dismembered soldiers bleeding out while Broly looked back at them scowling, his hand wedged through the chest of a soldier who's blue blood was leaking out of his mouth.

"J-Just who are you?" a squad captain called out, never seeing something like this before.

Broly flashed again, appearing in front of the captain, his palm stretched towards his face.

"The Legendary Super Saiyan"

"The Legendary whaaa-"

Broly gripped the soldier's head, pulling it off the rest of his body immediately then pushed it back into his chest, firing a small ki beam that eviscerated the soldier before severely damaging the base, causing rubble and debris to fly away while a green smokescreen settled.

"P-Please, don't kill me!"

A soldier knelt down, begging for his life.

PEW! PEW! Pew!

"You fucking coward!"

"Just because your face a strong enemy"

A soldier marched up to the Broly.

"I don't know if you understand who you have messed with, we're the Frieza Force, the strongest army in the Galaxy!" the soldier stated boldly.

'This guy is either the bravest or dumbest man in the entire universe' Yami said, genuinely puzzled at where the alien found its confidence.

"Who decided that?"

Broly simply pushed his hand forward, busting through the chest of the alien, gripping his heart and squeezing down on it hard before ripping it out of his chest.

It really wasn't that difficult for him to do.

The alien had what could only be described as pure confusion as well as belated panic written on his face.

Broly looked back to the soldiers eager to see their reactions.

"Just because you killed a few weaklings doesn't mean you can beat us!" they said defiantly, squaring up to Broly.

"Isn't that what your buddy said?" Broly questioned, stamping his foot against the skull of the last enemy, crushing it.

"Well he's not me," the alien said, readying ki at his fingertips.

'I figured it out!' Yami deduced.

Broly reeled back moving his arm as far away as he could, shifting his waist.

'These guys are just beyond retarded'

The guard raised his fists, eager to prove his strength to Broly, materialising a thick ki barrier.

PSH!

Broly's hand viciously smacked against the guard's face, disrespecting the barrier into non-existence and knocking the head of the soldier clean off his shoulders with such great force that the friction on the other side of the soldier's head was too great, forcing the whole thing to catch fire.

Broly twisted on his toes, levitating in the air and performing a spinning jump, moving the head 360 degrees before slamming it back into the chest of the soldier, sending it rocking back to the military base, a sliver of ki following.

BOOM!

The soldier's watched another green smokescreen form.

"I ain't never seen shit like that before"

"But it doesn't matter!"

"You may have beat him but that doesn't mean you can beat me!"

Yami was speechless.

(A few minutes later)

Broly had an idea.

It was a sort of martial arts move that would keep his opponent in the air and allow him to hit them for longer, he found it hard to keep his opponent in the air for a long time as he had to chase them down after delivering force to them but with this concept, he could hit them up and down and make them move forward in the air, looping them.

He liked the idea but he didn't have anyone to try it on, not wanting to torture Queen Vegeta any longer.

"Let's play a game!" he said to the frightened soldier who watched the rest of his squad bleed out and die.

It's done

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