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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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An Uncommon Disconnect (56)

Broly's spaceship fluttered gently as it levitated, then slowly picked up speed as it streaked into the sky, a green aura covering it as it left Planet Sythis.

Mr Yellow left the navigation room and quickly entered the library.

The Tuffles, in all their diligence, even when fleeing Planet Plant were still curious enough to draw a map of all the nearby planets in between.

Zelta didn't have a set destination and Broly said Mr Yellow could pick out the first Planet they visited, something that he took very seriously. Mr Yellow flew forward, mechanical sounds ringing out as his right arm unfolded forming a USB.

'What do we have here?' he thought as he looked at the map.

'Who are you?' Broly thought confronting the voice.

'That's a very difficult question to answer' the voice responded, it's tone almost sounding disinterested.

'I'm not joking with you answer the question!' Broly said, now more forceful.

'Calm Down!' the voice said irritatedly.

'I am the essence which appears in the mind of a Legendary Super Saiyan. Since the age of Yamoshi my kind have fused with all the Saiyans that appear once every thousand years' the voice said seriously.

'Legendary Super Saiyan?' Broly thought, not buying a word it was saying.

The voice laughed.

'Have you not realised that you're aren't a are common Saiyan warrior? Did you think the gap between you and the rest of your family was just a result of the environment? And I thought you were a smarter Saiyan,' the voice scolded.

Broly ignored the tone of the voice, finding truth in its words.

'What should I call you?' Broly thought, to sure how to address the voice.

'My kind have existed since the time of Yamoshi and I possess the memories of him and everyone followed, that was my first and true name' the voice said honestly.

'But I don't think it's appropriate to call you the name of a Saiyan who passed long ago, you're being is something else entirely,' Broly said, calling out the voice.

The voice chuckled.

'While I did not exist in the conventional sense at that time, I possess the knowledge of those who did, I will not accept a name that isn't Yamoshi!' the Voice said proudly.

'Then I will call you 'Yam' or 'Moshi', which do you prefer?' Broly thought, refusing to call the wicked voice the name of his ancestor.

The voice deflated audibly and said, "You may call me Yami if you wish", compromising.

'Ok, Yami, how are you speaking to me right now?'

The voice laughed once again sinisterly, causing Broly to tense up.

'Well, Broly, as I said earlier you were supposed to be absorbed naturally as I merged into to you but you have rejected your Saiyan roots to such a degree that your mind in order to not be destroyed, split in two, separating me from you' the voice said slowly, dry intimidation building in its words.

Timed seemed to slow down as the words hit Broly with force, causing his heartbeat to quicken.

Yami laughed and continued.

'Bluntly put it seemed I did merge with you but not how I should have naturally, I joined with everything you resist, everything you reject, that is what I am now'

'You sound evil' Broly said, trying to force Yami back into his mind.

'Well whether you like it or not, I'm a part of you now, whether you know it or not I can see, hear and feel everything you can,' Yami said softly.

Yami then sighed bitterly, hating himself for his weakness.

'But I must admit, you are the one who has power over our body, your freakish will power rejects every part of me and forces me away' the voice said jealously.

'Our?' Broly questioned, cynicism rising in his voice.

Yami suddenly calmed down, sounding much more sincere and heartfelt than before.

'I already know this whole endeavour is confusing but I am your friend, I am a guardian of sorts to help you grow and properly develop into your Legendary Super Saiyan state,' Yami said, now incredibly more soothing than before.

Broly relaxed visibly.

'What do you mean by Legendary Super Saiyan state?' Broly asked, trusting Yami only a little bit more.

'Another difficult question but I will try my best,' the Yami said, hiding his reluctance.

'Saiyans are malleable creatures, you can already see this with your family they all have different strengths and specialties'

Broly reflected, finding truth in Yami's words which made him believe Yami's story more and more, his scepticism dying.

'The Super Saiyan state, as of now, is a powerful form that increases the strength of a Saiyan by fifty and your Legendary state is well over 200 times that!' Yami said enticingly.

Broly waited patiently, allowing Yami to continue speaking.

'The form you saw Celery and Aspa enter was a Psuedo-Super Saiyan state, a few factors stopping them from achieving the full transformation.'

Broly listened carefully, before he highly doubted Yami's words, but now he paid painstaking attention, making sure not to miss anything.

Yami sensed this and laughed internally, which couldn't be heard by Broly.

'However! You have already achieved the Super Saiyan transformation!' Yami announced grandly, blowing Broly's mind.

'I-I have?'

'Only for a few seconds, you were correct to release you ki as that was the culprit for your anger, and when you did your body forcibly evolved, growing much stronger and durable from the transformation'

Broly hung onto every word Yami uttered, captivated as the secrets of his race were revealed, he had noticed that he had gotten taller and more muscular while his tail had grown longer but chalked it up to him growing, he was still in his teens after all.

'In actuality, the Legendary Super Saiyan form for Yamoshi was the form you experienced, but while there may not be evidence for it, I believe that your Legendary Super Saiyan state will be much more different, the Saiyan bloodline has evolved after all' Yami concluded.

'How do you know all this?'

'It's complicated, too complicated to explain, I'll try later if you don't mind, I', actually very tired' Yami said, retreating back into Broly's mind.

'No it's fine, thank you for what you have said so far'

Yami paused for a second, before laughing out wildly.

'You're welcome Broly' he said as he was silenced.

Broly sat back into the navigation chair, a thousand thoughts running through his mind.

'I don't think Yami is bad after all' Broly concluded, while his actions at the Tsufurian Tournament was questionable, knowing what the Saiyans were, it wasn't illogical.

Although Broly couldn't shake off an ominous feeling, he decided he would trust Yami for the time being.

He was inside his own head after all.

Yami who could hear all of Broly's thoughts was laughing silently in his own corner of Broy's mind.

"Step by step," he assured himself.

[Storyteller: What a twist! It turns out Broly is actually the modern-day appearance of the Legendary Super Saiyan! Who could have seen that coming? I already know you can't what for the next chapter to drop so...]

*[Script flipping noises]*

[Storyteller: Put your power stones in the bag?]

Is Yami bad?

Probably.

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