Unexpected turn of events

(3rd person)

As soon as Max got control of Sefirah Castle and permanently suppressed the will of Celestial Worthy or in other words the will of the Oldest One. There was a huge change in cosmos. And all the high level beings in the universe sensed it. The barrier created by Original Creator suddenly lost most of its power, if before this it would have lasted for 18 more years, now it will barely last 5 more.

Even though this was bad news for the inhabitants of Earth and good news for the Outer Deities. The Outer Deities were not happy with this development at all, specifically Mother Goddess of Depravity, Mother Tree of Desire and Son of Chaos. 'They' even felt for the first time in their existence something similar to panic. This is because all of this was very unexpected to 'Them'. 'They' had already calculated most of the events and all the plans of these puny 'worms' of this planet. But recently 'They' noticed an anomaly entering the planet. This anomaly didn't change anything for years in any of the schemes so 'They' stopped paying attention to it.

But now 'They' realized that this oversight was alarming, why would 'They' allow an unstable factor to live even if it's not unstable now? And 'They' now see, that it's destabilizing the balance of the universe by suppressing 'Their' Father's will and feel fear and panic. Even though 'They' feel it might be too late already, 'They' call a truce between 'Them' and want to work together to face the threat from this anomaly. 'They' communicate with each other in a way, mortals can't comprehend and decide to launch an attack on the barrier. And 'They' also order 'Their' pawns inside the barrier to find and kill the anomaly or die trying.

All of these discussions between the Outer Deities happen and finish in a few moments after Max gets the Sefirah Castle. And as soon as 'They' finish, a Blood Moon erupts like never before because of the thinning of the barrier with full rage of Primordial Moon.

This happened on the night of 11th July, Year 1349 of the Fifth Epoch at 8.05 pm Backlund time. And this was just the start of the completely one sided war between the new Lord of the Mysteries and the Outer Deities.

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As soon as the barrier weakened, most of the True Gods went into panic. And many were confused as to the cause of this. But before worrying about anything else they needed to keep the barrier from falling apart because of the sudden assault.

Due to this, 'They' didn't notice that the seal on the Western Continent was now on the verge of falling apart. It would at most last till the end of the year. Of course this was a prelude to a new chaotic era that was now descending upon the world.

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A man with golden hair and beard with a simple white cloak wearing a silver cross on his neck like an ordinary priest is sitting on a pew on a church in Loen Kingdom. His eyes look pure and innocent at first glance. If anyone looks at him, they can only think that he is what a priest of a God should act like.

Currently he has a surprised look on his face. He says, "This is quite surprising, that anomaly derailed the entire trend of the times. He even suppressed that will. This will definitely turn this era chaotic, I just don't know if that's a good thing or not."

He then gets up from the pews and turns around and vanishes from the place.

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In a land filled with darkness, only illuminated occasionally by flashes of lightning. A young man with a broad forehead, thin face, black eyes and curly black hair is walking around in this empty place towards South. He is wearing a monocle that hangs over his right eye and a black pointed hat. There are also many ravens flying around scouting the place. The man currently has a smile on his face like he is amused by something while looking upwards towards the sky.

"Is this because of that new guy that my zealot brother told me about? He seems interesting to do all this so soon. I wonder what zealot brother will do with him, now that he has derailed all his plans for ascension. I really hope to meet him soon and have fun." He says that with an enigmatic smile on his face and then goes off on his way.

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In a place of endless and silent darkness filled with moonflowers and night vanilla. There is an extremely beautiful lady with a hazy face that . 'She' is wearing a layered black dress with countless sparkling specks of radiance like the stars. 'Her' ribs and waist each stretch a pair of arms. Among the six hands, two of them hold a black scythe, two of them hold a 'moon' and the last two are empty. There is also a circle of radiating rays at the bottom of 'Her' head.

'She' is looking towards an unknown location with a complex expression. "So he actually was able to get it just by spouting some words?! But his methods aren't simple either, he definitely has artifacts on angel level. I suppose he isn't bad choice either, but how was he actually able to suppress the will of the Original Creator?" 'She' then shakes her head and looks towards another place. "I suppose now is not the time to think about this. I should go and stabilize the barrier for now."

She moves a little and vanishes from the place.

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After he established the control over the Sefirah Castle, Max got a premonition that something big is about to happen in the outside world. So he first sends Klein back to his body. And then teleports to Klein's room himself. Klein seems confused at suddenly being ejected from Sefirah Castle and frowns towards Max. But when he is about to ask about what is happening, he hurriedly shuts his mouth because of the terrifying expression on Max's face while looking towards the crimson moon through the window.

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So that was the chapter. Did you like it?

Honestly I wrote a chapter yesterday too but because I was too frustrated and crazy at the time, I wrote some absurd things and didn't post it. Today I edited it a lot but still kept some things from the chapter I wrote yesterday, so its a half crazy version now. If you guys don't like it, I could totally delete it but I personally think that this chapter adds a new flavor to the story. What do you guys think?

Also this was my first 3rd person view chapter on Webnovel, was it good enough or should I just write from 1st person view?