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coiling Dragon Fanfic: Thunder Dominion

I’ve read few coiling dragon fanfics but they never did justice to the wonderful story, I at least wanna come close to it. I’m gonna finish this fic so stay for the ride. Watch how Lucas Draper dominate the four highest planes. Just to clarify my story take place trillions of years before the main story!

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Avery

Roll back the time to when Lucas killed the poor God who demanded entrance fee. Apparently he had his saint body left in the clan, later went straight to clan head compound to 'Report' this injustice.

In one of the eighteen clans around the Amethyst mountain, a bald man was sitting on a cushion trying to comprehend the mysteries when he got a notice from his guards that a clansmen wanted to see him and it was urgent

The door the hall opened and it was the man that Lucas killed, his God clone ti exact.

He knelt on the floor and said "Patriach someone killed my strongest God clone after I asked him to pay the entry fee, he took no regards to our clans face and killed me without saying a word"

The bald man was immediately angered and shouted "Impudence! Why have you disturbed me with this trivial thing, do you know how many stupid and reckless people enter without paying the entry fee although they pay it with their life later if they managed to come out" The bald man was fuming "it's still not something that you should bother me with, you should go look for the elders of the clan for this not me!!"

After that the bald clan head threw out the man who disturbed him.

"Hmm although he was foolish and disturbed me, still how dare someone kill one of my clansmen and except to get away with it, let's first see who this person is. Kalan!!"

A petite women with a green skirt came in "Yes Patriach!?" The petite women responded

"Find out who killed Mazuru's God clone and went in the amethyst mountain without paying the entrance fee"

"I'll be on it right away Patriach" the petite women said and left.

Few hours later an water image was floating infront of the bald man. After a while the bald man's face froze and said " Primal Fiend!!"

He recognized Lucas appearance right away, Lucas by now has killed few 7-star powerhouses with ease, so in every report Lucas was a bonafied Ashura and not someone who can easily be messed with. Especially his Grandmist space has earned him a lot of fame for being able to kill multiple enemies. And these eighteen clan heads were only 7-star fiends. So it was no wonder that the bald man was scared shitless when he saw Lucas image. 'was i about to throw away my life right now?' The bald man had cold sweat running through his back

He roared "Kalan!!! bring me Mazaru now!!"

After few minutes Mazaru came and with a smile and said " Patriach you wanted to see…"

Before he could even finish his greeting a slap fell upon his head and he died just like that. The bald man wasn't finish with just killing him, he kept on stomping on Mazuru's corpse and then spat on it.

"You fucker!! Are you trying to orchestrate my downfall, you actually wanted me to fight the Primal Fiend aghhhh!" The bald man so mad his insides was burning "What a useless fucker!!" After that the bald man sat back down and said quietly " I hope that Death Star leaves. Kalan!" The bald man looked for his servant

Kalan who was standing on the side watched how the bald man killed Mazaru, she knew how eccentric the bald man was, " Yes patriarch"

"Let me know immediately when Primal fiend leaves, am I clear?" The bald commanded

"As you wish Patriach" Kalan answered and then left.

Forty six thousand year was nothings for gods who has endless life but for the bald man this forty something years has been torture for him because he haven't heard news of Lucas leaving.

Finally one day Kalan came in and reported that Lucas left and his direction was not here.

The bald man sighed of relief "Good grief, just leave far and far away and never come back, Kalan tell the rest of the clan that they if they bring disaster upon themselves they should not include me in their death sentence alright?"

"I'll let them know Patriach"

"Good, now off with you, I'll take a long nap. These past few years have been rough"

The Thunder plane it's not divided into several continents like in the Infernal realm, no there is just one huge continent.

In of the teleportation places, there were a sovereign's army guarding it, two men was drinking and chatting happily "Boss I can't Believe that miss Avery is just less than two hundred thousand years and she managed to become a 7-star fiend she's indeed a genius of the Hurlei family"

"She recently became a 7-star fiend so the clan is holding a banquet for her, many powerhouses are invited to celebrate this happy occasion but sadly we're too weak to be invited apparently you have to be at least 6-star"

"If i could marry her i would die happily the day after boss"

"You should put away those foolish thoughts of yours or you will die for real"

All of sudden the teleportation array lit up and two people stepped off. Just their Aura made these two guards hearts palpitate.

Lucas scanned his surroundings and spotted these two guards and said to Belion "Let's go the Hurlei family's home should be west from here according to the map"

After Lucas used an newly created movement skill he created after he fused his fifth mystery, he calls it 'God step'

By comprehending The mystery of movement in the Thunder element makes you unbelievably fast, and by fusing five mysteries together and creating speed related skill from it well… you'd be fast enough to take anyone on without them being able to react. And if you cannot react to your enemy then you're as good as dead.

Lucas enveloped Belion with his skill and lightning flashed then he basically teleported away to the eyes of ordinary High Gods. The two gods were flabbergasted one of them shouted " what!! is he an Ashura, This kind of speed? I didn't even see his afterimage"

After we left the teleportation array, we flew for about a month before we arrived at Kaminari Prefecture were the Hurlei family were located.

The Kaminari prefecture was really beautiful, it had rainbow colors lightning flashing in the skies from time to time. The verdant islands were the Hurlei family lived was even more beautiful

When they arrived at the prefecture they felt the festive air, everybody was in a good mood apparently. They flew few more hours and they arrived at the outskirts of verdant islands they were met with troops of hundreds. The captain stepped forward and said "Halt identify yourself!" Lucas showed the token the Chief sovereign gave him.

When they all saw the token, they bowed and said "we're sorry we didn't recognize the lord, forgive us for our transgressions"

Lucas looked at them and just said "Take us to the Patriachs place" "Yes my lord, follow me"

In an island inside in a mansion Endrick was sitting beside a women with purple hair, he was happy because this women was the new genius elder of his clan. "Avery it would not be impossible for you to fuse five mysteries together and become an Ashura, I hope you don't slack off and keep working hard"

The women named Avery looked at the Patriarch and nodded with a solem face and said "don't worry grandfather, slacking off is not in my nature" "Haha yes you are an cultivation maniac how could I forget that" Endrick replied

All of a sudden there's was a knock on the door and guard came in and said "Patriach there's someone who wants to see you, he has a Sovereign token on him"

Endrick's eyes lit up when he heard the news. "Alright you don't have to do anything I'll go welcome him myself"

Avery was taken aback by Endricks behavior and asked "Grandpa who is this guest that made you so happy?"

"You'll know soon enough, come with me to greet him" and they flew away, after few minutes they came across Lucas, Belion and the soldier who was leading them.

"Hahaha Lucas Draper the Primal fiend, I've finally met you in person" Endrick said laughing "I've heard about your deeds too Endrick, this is my brother Belion" Lucas introduced Belion

Endrick looked at Belion and nodded "Well your timing is perfect, this is Avery we're having an banquet celebratory feast for her for becoming a 7-star"

Lucas looked at Avery, he had seen plenty of beautiful women but they couldn't hold a candle to Avery and it was not just about beauty, her temperament her aura and everything about her felt regal. He took a step forward and said"Nice to meet you and congratulations for your achievement"

Avery was little taken aback, she knew her grandfather was a genuine Ashura and he only talks on equal foot with other Ashuras only, so that ment this blond haired man standing infront her was actually an Ashura. She responded kindly "Thank you but I still have long way to go" Avery said with a smile

All of a sudden a giant face appeared in the sky, before anyone reacted the giant face who is Hurlei said "Come and see in the floating castle up in the sky Lucas" Lucas looked up and responded respectfully "Yes sovereign"

"I'll be going to meet with the sovereign, can you show Belion a place to rest?" Lucas asked Endrick and he responded "No problem, go do your business"

"Alright I'll be back soon enough" Lucas assured Belion and flew away for the black

Avery looked up and asked Endrick " Is he the new Envoy of the sovereign?" " yes and do you know how old he is Avery?" Endrick responded with a question

Avery didn't answer but looked at Endrick "He's less than a hundred thousand years old and he's already an Ashura, in fact he's from the same material plane as father" he responded

Avery was shocked, she knew full well she would be considered a genius in all the planes throughout for managing to fuse four mysteries together in less than two hundred thousand years, but this guy managed to fuse five mysteries in less than a hundred thousand years? What a monster! Avery thought

After Lucas landed outside in the black castle he heard a voice telling to come in.

When Lucas went in he saw a beautiful scenery, Hurlei was sitting in a stone dais beside a pond with two fish in it. It was was greenery all around him, it truly looked harmonious.

"Come and sit Lucas" Hurlei pointing at the empty stone deis beside him. Lucas took a seat, he was feeling a bit nervous, no sovereign would allow a God to sit with him on equal footing

" you don't have to nervous, I'm very to have a genius from my home plane coming up. Infact you're no different from my son. So… what kind of Sovereign artifact do you want Lucas? As my envoy you are entitled to one sovereign artifact so choose carefully"

Lucas thought for a while, he already has a strong body equal to an High God artifact. His soul is even stronger because of his soul mutation, only a paragon could hurt him but that's still up for debate too.

With an Attack Artifact no Ashura would be his opponent and even if they wore material defense artifact he would still bombard their insides

Luca finally decided and said "I choose an attack oriented Sovereign artifact Spear"

Hurlei had a smile on his face and then took a Dark Purple looking spear, the Spear had Lightning patterns all across over it. Hurlei looked at Lucas and said "I've nurtured this spear with my lightning divine power for trillions of years, so the compatibility with you is quite high" he threw the spear to Lucas who catched it perfectly.

Lucas was mesmerized by this spear "it's actually pulsating?" Lucas could feel vibration from the spear and asked Hurlei

"It's the mystery of magnetism, this spear is very conductive to lightning so for a thunder element god this spear is Perfect"

After that they chatted for a while, about Ceres plane and about the mysteries. Hurlei was not a paragon he had only to managed to fuse five mysteries together, not all sovereign are paragons even with the influx of such huge faith power. At the end it all comes down to talent.

After a month of talking and comparing their mysteries, Lucas flew out of the castle and flew to one of the islands Belion were on.

When Lucas arrived Belion flew out from his courtyard and asked excitedly "You met with the sovereign?" "I did, and I got a sovereign artifact too" Lucas answered

"Hahah, I don't think no shura should be your opponent" Belion continued "Well pity that you missed the banquet they held

For Avery, lots of good food there"

"No biggie, I'm not really a fan of these events anyway. Let's go in" Lucas and Belion kept chatting for few hours, it was mostly Lucas explaining to Belion about the mysteries "You should calm and follow the example of how you fused the third mystery, begin first to fuse with Thunder element it's a solid base to have and later build on top of it…" as they were chatting they heard a knock on the door "Come in" Belion said. And Avery came swalsing in

"I'm sorry to disturb you Sir Lucas, but I wondered if you could give me a point or two about Thunder mysteries" Avery asked, she really wanted to know how a genius mind worked so she could take inspiration from it

"Of course Miss Avery and call me Lucas" Lucas responded "well I'm gonna look for the catering team and see if there's still some food left" Belion said beside Lucas and went for he exit

The first minutes was little stiff between them, but as time went by they started to feel comfortable and actually enjoyed each other's company. Avery was really fascinated from how Lucas saw the world and the way he saw the laws and could easily fuse them together, to him it wasn't complicated at all.

Without them even noticing time flew by and three years went by. "So you're really going to the infernal realm and challenge a palace master to take ownership?" Avery asked "Ever since I left my home plane I never really had any fixed place to call home, so i want to create a place for me call a home and hopefully settle down" Lucas responded

Avery looked at him for a while then said "I'll go with you then I've actually never left the thunder plane so I wanna go out and explore what the world has to offer" Lucas was taken aback and asked "Are you sure, you're leaving your family, your home?"

Avery smiled and said "Well my Water clone is here, so wanna have a company?"

"Well I kinda enjoyed your presence the past few years, it would feel weird without it from now on" Then Lucas took her hand and smiled, he really enjoyed having her around she brought fresh air to his full life.

"Okay then, we'll be leaving tomorrow"

damn I’ve just noticed how I suck at romance sigh…

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