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Chronicler of the Mugiwaras (One Piece)

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Kotarou finally had the courage to start reading and watching One Piece ... As he regrets not having read it before ... After dying in an accident, he had no choice but to be Transmigrated to the world of One Piece. Hello guys. This is my first fanfic, and English is not my language, any spelling mistakes you notice and want to correct me, I will be grateful. I think my idea for this fanfic can be a little greedy, and being my first fanfic, mistakes have appeared everywhere. ^ - ^ Mc may not be everyone's favorite. Kotarou is not a Mc badass, he is weak, and has his problems, many will not identify with him. So if you want to read something with a Mc badass that is reborn or transmigrates with many desires, system, being Overpower and catching all the girls just looking at them, this fanfic will not be to your liking. You are lucky, 9/10 of the Webnovel fanfics fits this standard, so give these fanfics a chance, they will certainly be to your liking. (Many are well done, but this is not the story I want to tell.) The harem tag is included, and I must say that I am a big fan of that tag, BUT, as much as the story is harem, I will try to make the progression of the romance slow, you can see cute and romantic moments, but the dating itself does not it will make progress so soon, I want to try to make everything as natural as possible. And finally, One Piece does not belong to me. Only my ideas and OC belong to me.

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Chapter 1A day that should be normal.

In a dark room, with the only source of light in it being a monitor on, next to it, we see a young boy, about 16 years old, with a blanket around his shoulders, staring at the screen.

"... huuu....."

The boy's eyes were swollen and a few moments later, his eyes began to fill with tears again, as he always does, the boy rubs his face on his blanket.

"I can't stand it..... Because Ace had to die ?... Huuu.... *sniff*.....

With a lot of tears filling his face, the boy whispered to himself.

"Kotarou."

A door knock and a voice that has always been part of his life caught the boy's attention. Kotarou stands up dragging his thin body and opening the door, he saw his mother's mother figure.

"Mother."

With his eyes still full of tears and swollen, the boy talks to his mother.

"Eh..... Are you still crying seeing that drawing? You've been crying since the time you woke up. .....

With your eyes now wide open with shock.

"MUMMM, you said the forbidden word, Anime is not a drawing. What will you do if the hunters come ?

With his eyes expressing his false fear, he says to his mother.

"Baka."

A slap on the head did his duty and took away his son's falsehood. Kotarou pouting, talks to his mother.

"You didn't have to hit me... Why did you call me? I'm in an important part, I want to see the Mugiwaras going to console Luffy".

Kotarou says with animation in his voice.

"Ahhhh, yes, I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to interrupt your moment with your dear "Anime." Remember that I left the camera to fix ?. I need you to go get it, I'll be busy now.

Says the mother to her son.

"Ehhh..."

Before the boy can try to argue and buy some time to see anime for a while longer, his mother looked at him with a look that made her son stand still. "As the saying goes, he who doesn't know you buys you."

"Okay...."

With a discouraged look, the boy removes the blanket that was on his shoulders, and goes to change, while his mother leaves the room and goes back to the thing that made him busy.

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Pov (1st person)

Soon after changing my clothes and washing my face, since I couldn't go out with that swollen face I had. I'm walking down to meet my mother.

"Mom, I'm leaving now."

I say as I give her a tight hug and kiss her cheek. (Is this common in other countries ? I know some where this kind of affection with your mother is not common, but in mine it is normal).

"Okay, go Kota. And be careful out there.

She says with a neutral face, while shaking her hand like she's scaring a mosquito.

"Ehh....."

With my sad fake face, I leave home. With a smile I begin to sing softly.

"Yohohoho, yohohoho

Yohoho, yohohoho

Yohoho, yohohoho

Yohohoho, yohohoho"

(Bink's no Sake)

While I was happy and thinking about the last episodes of One Piece I watched, I couldn't help but show a sad expression.

"I never thought I'd have so many tears."

I say it in a sarcastic sad tone.

"I should have started watching long before, so I'd be in Wano's bow now, I hear it's very good."

After walking for a while, my mood changed every few seconds, so close to the store. But in a single moment everything changed, I felt a sudden pain, and all my vision recorded was Heaven and my ears, a very loud sound. I felt my body very warm and as fast as it came, and gave way to an absurd cold.... When my mind recorded what happened and hearing people's voices asking me to call the ambulance, finally my mind recorded what happened, and as my vision turned black, my thoughts went.

"Ahhh, I would like to see the end of One Piece..... and maybe watch it again with my mother... She's going to be very shaken by this, not ?....

With a great sadness that my mother has to go through a pain like this, my life is gone...

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Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 2-Stars Writing Quality [It is better grammar than the average Webnovel, even If it is not perfect!] Story Development [ Yeah, I am not that impressed right now but that may change in the Future, we will see. I will Tell you that because that's what I always find irritaiting. Why do people keep creating more One Piece FF where the Mc joins the Strawhat pirates...I could as well just read the Original and it would be way more interessting than any FF out there. Make something interessting and ...join the marines, create a pirate crew, build an Underground Empire ...etc etc there are so many options!] Character Design [ While I find it good that the Mc cares about his mother...this is so Stupid. Any mother would want the Best for their child. His mother would rather want him to have a good life in his next 'life' than wasting his wish for her, considering that he goes to such an Evil World where strength rules and the weak can watch from the sidlines. If you aren't strong in the One Piece World than you can go suicide. Also the fact that he joins the Strawhat Pirates is a -1 for me.] Updating Stability [ Not much to say here] World Background [ I have the Feeling that the Author doesn't know anything about Devil fruits except that there are 3 different types! ] [ While it isn't outright Bad, it isn't really Good either. I myself won't continue reading it ...read Story Development, than you know why!] (AN: English isn't my mother language and I don't prove read what I write, soooo .....just Deal with it !!!!!)

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