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2021-01-06 02:07

LOVE IT!!! DIFFERENT FROM OTHER FANFICS!!! NEED MORE UPDATE MORE!!! ..................................................................................

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Writing Quality 4-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 2-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 2-Stars Writing Quality [It is better grammar than the average Webnovel, even If it is not perfect!] Story Development [ Yeah, I am not that impressed right now but that may change in the Future, we will see. I will Tell you that because that's what I always find irritaiting. Why do people keep creating more One Piece FF where the Mc joins the Strawhat pirates...I could as well just read the Original and it would be way more interessting than any FF out there. Make something interessting and ...join the marines, create a pirate crew, build an Underground Empire ...etc etc there are so many options!] Character Design [ While I find it good that the Mc cares about his mother...this is so Stupid. Any mother would want the Best for their child. His mother would rather want him to have a good life in his next 'life' than wasting his wish for her, considering that he goes to such an Evil World where strength rules and the weak can watch from the sidlines. If you aren't strong in the One Piece World than you can go suicide. Also the fact that he joins the Strawhat Pirates is a -1 for me.] Updating Stability [ Not much to say here] World Background [ I have the Feeling that the Author doesn't know anything about Devil fruits except that there are 3 different types! ] [ While it isn't outright Bad, it isn't really Good either. I myself won't continue reading it ...read Story Development, than you know why!] (AN: English isn't my mother language and I don't prove read what I write, soooo .....just Deal with it !!!!!)

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