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Brutalis: The crucible of life

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What is Brutalis: The crucible of life

Lee la novela Brutalis: The crucible of life escrita por el autor Jason_Coonce publicada en WebNovel. Ethan, was a young boy was thrust from his childhood into one of loneliness and despair due to the actions of a dark cult that he was raised in. After the cult that he grew up in called Tenebrosus us...

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Ethan, was a young boy was thrust from his childhood into one of loneliness and despair due to the actions of a dark cult that he was raised in. After the cult that he grew up in called Tenebrosus used him as a sacrifice to bring forth their dark god Zaggoth. He was broken as a person due to the stress of watching his family being eaten in front of him. This was set up to become the vessel for the dark god Zaggoth, Zaggoth wanted a new host to bring the world into despair and darkness. This is the story of Ethan's journey into the world of Brutalis, a world of brutal monsters and evolution. I am going to put a warning here, the first couple of chapters are very dark. If you cannot handle that, I would suggest maybe skimming it. However, it does play a part into why Ethan is the way he is as they are important to the story. But chapter 3 and on is more light hearted in certain scenes.

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I shut my locker and started making my way towards my next class . I was already late and the hallway was almost empty . I picked up my pace . Suddenly a loud thump came from behind me and an immense crushing pain seared through my back . I was slammed in the lockers . I closed my eyes from the sudden contact and pain . Opening my eyes I groaned . The breathe left me all at once . He was the one who pushed . His eyes held so many emotions . anger , hatred and betrayal . It pained me to see that I was the cause of them . Suddenly his fist came flying with full force towards my face and my eyes widened at the thought that he was going to hit me . I closed my eyes waiting for the impact but instead of breaking my face he punched the locker inches away from my face putting a dent on it . He smirked at me . All the colors drained from my face . " What did you thought that no one will know who you are ?" The moment the words left from his mouth I stiffened . He knew . Oh my god ! He knew ! His smirk even widened more when he saw the emotion in my eyes . Intense fear . I'm screwed . He pushed me more against the locker . It hurts in my back so much . A tear escaped from my eye and he smiled like he was enjoying it . " I know who you are and I'm going to make it hell for you , Emma." He said while clicking my name . He spoke with so much hatred and anger that it sent fear to the cores of my body . He once again slammed his fist in locker making the dent more visible and walked away leaving me in the fear. .................... Emma Parker , a 17 years old girl . She is a chocolaty brown eyes brunette. She is running from the scars that her past life gave her. Running from everything she knew . What happens when she tries move on from her past that is still haunting her ? ******** This is the first book that I'm going to write on wattpad . So I hope you guys like it . I hope you guys like the book.

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Sir_Killington
Sir_KillingtonLv10Sir_Killington

Brutal indeed! I'm super impressed with the vividness of your imagery (especially during the first scene of chapter 2). Your grammar and sentence flow are something to note too! Overall, I was very satisfied with the read!

CetusWritings
CetusWritingsLv3CetusWritings

The novel is really great, the details in each chapter is amazing although there were a few grammat mistakes I saw but it was barely noticeable. And the emotions for each character especially Ethan, it was amazing and great I definitely feel it has great potential, it's story and world building was great as well. The pace of the novel was definitely great as well and I would love to continue to read to see how Ethan will grow further and to see how will the author improve himself in writing the novel and story. So all in all it's a great novel, I definitely recommend reading it if you have the time!

Galanar
GalanarLv15Galanar

Your writing quality is great. I found little to no typos, and there were no structural errors that I saw either. Regarding the update stability, I put at three stars, because you dumped many chaps in one day, then took 2 days to post another, and then another 2 days XD The story seems to be moving at a good pace and the character design is good. Your world background is where you shine most :) Keep up the good work :)

VertiKalEl
VertiKalElLv4VertiKalEl

Honestly. Your writing is really good. the narration allows to imagine it and be immersed.im it like I want to when I look for books to read. alas I can't continue. at least not immediately. I was eating while reading and the scenes were so well written I nearly lost my meal. keep up the good work. I'm sure those that love such a genre will eat this up. if u write a book of a different kind with this good a writing capability I will definitely read it. *** embarrassed. guess I have a weak stomach. my mind is too fragile. sigh.

PsionicMind
PsionicMindLv3PsionicMind

The writing quality is pretty good but the only problem is the tenses as they bother me the most when it comes novels. There's also some instances where it feels like the author is talking to us. Although I don't know if it's intentional or not. Everything else is pretty good except for the worldbuilding as we don't know if the MC is originally from earth or some other planet. I know that there's no need for that info but I'd have liked it way more if it had that.

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