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Awakening the Ancient System

Eastern Fantasy
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This novel is completely for those who desire MC that are super-strong without necessary cultivating to attain supreme level in their dao path of cultivation. [Enlisted into the Fantasy Carnival entry] please your vote, critics and reviews would be appreciated

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Justin_Gabventure
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I like the book, it's interesting and easy going. I must say, the author has put much effort in the plot of this work, I like this book and I highly recommend this book to whosoever is reading this

SolomonCliff
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Revela spoiler

Demons_and_I
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I'll give you the 5 stars when you edit the first chapter to a point where it's readable and when you post a second chapter. Just DM me on Discord and I'll do it immediately 😁👍

Janjao
JanjaoLv1Janjao

The way you wrote at the beginning was really enjoyable. However, after that, I just sort of zoned out a bit. As a non-native, I'm kind of overwhelmed. The fact that I don't read much doesn't help me in this situation at all. But I can see that you did give it some thoughts Story development i don't see yet (or i zoned out and did not notice im very sorry if i did) I'll give you four and more. Keep up the good work

The_Procrastinator
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DaoistHolySwitch
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This my beginning but not the end, tryna make sure u receive the best i can offer guys read and make your reviews. I'm here always to receive your critics and know one which could be of a help

Twin_Lantern
Twin_LanternLv3Twin_Lantern

Its quite good and I'm curious about the main character. The first chapter is too long if you ask me, with so much info it looks a bit oversaturated but I'm confident it will be better after editing.

Parnellis
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The writing quality is very satisfactory, the usage of words are exceptional although quite a number of them seems to be gramatically incorrect. The stability of updates is considerably slow for a second chapter that only lasts a few hundred words, but we'll have to see. It's the Story Development that I can't comment on, I have yet to see an actual development but there has only been 2 chapters published so far, so once again, we'll have to see. The Character Design is very generic, nothing too special. There has been a minimal amount of character interactions both between the characters to reader and a character to another character. World Background is not yet to be described in detail, the only thing I've seen so far is that it just seems like a modern setting.

Aug_ust15
Aug_ust15Lv2Aug_ust15

Woah😍😍😍 this is a beautiful piece of art. The novel is wonderful, with detailed explanation and everything just makes it eye-catching. Keep it coming 👍👍

ShadowAmeratsu
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The writing quality could use a bit of work, but it has a great concept behind it. With a bit of editing, it could get 5 stars, easily. It has good characters and a nice plot, so I'm hoping to see more of this :)

Anniasa_Uchiha
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I love this story it is a good and I want more to this story. I love how everyone is acting together. I would recommend this story to anyone. [img=recommend] keep on writing

Darkness_Descends
Darkness_DescendsLv3Darkness_Descends

A good read and a well worded novel with great grammar, systems seems to be theme but this is quite unique, hoping to see more chapters as I have great aspiration for this novel

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