#ACTION #ROMANCE #COMEDY #HAREM #DARK #ANTIHERO

Ashen Sun

As a teenager living a fairly normal life, Aaron's life took a radical change when he was caught in a bus accident. It was at the dying moment of his life, that he met a mysterious woman smiling down at him. Offering him a choice to live and join 'Ashen Sun', a secret organization having an objective of eradicating the evils of the world, but underneath it all, things aren't what they portray it to be. With the organization surrounded by mystery and danger, Aaron only had two objectives: survive and live to see his family once more. **************************************************** Discord server: https://discord.gg/w6UWHfGzS8 Hi there, just some things before starting, English is not my mother language, so probably there will be mistakes. I will be grateful if you tell them to me. About the schedule... at the moment there isn't, but expect a chapter every 2 or 3 days. When I finally adjust my schedule I will put it here. Another thing, some of the tags might take their time to see them, like the harem, romance and the antihero, as I intend to do some "slow" character development. Also, I don't mind criticism as long as you are respectful and preferably constructive. If you need it, here is my discord: Donutsaurio#2874 But enough of all that, this is my first novel so have patience with me and don't doubt about giving me advice or correcting me. Said all that, enjoy my novel! *The original art is not mine, if you want to take it down tell me in the comment

Donutsaurio · Real

Sin suficientes valoraciones

20 Chs

News and poll

Hi, author here.

I will start this note by saying that I will probably start again posting in early January.

Anyways, I have been progressing in the planning of the plot, but it has been impossible to progress quickly due to my exams, so that's why it will be in January.

Apart from that, I've been reading the early chapters, and... I have mixed feelings. They aren't that bad, but they could be improved a lot, so I started thinking if I should start the novel from the beginning.

Now, let me explain that. What I would do is delete all the chapters, and start writing from scratch. I would post the chapters as new ones, but probably I would do it daily. The plot wouldn't change at all, but there would be little edits here and there to make the reading better. An example of what could be improved is the number of plot holes. Why are there so many? Simply because I didn't have an outline of the chapter or the novel itself, so I would write what I wanted in the moment, and later, when I had already posted the chapter, think about it, and lots of plot holes appear. Of course, I can't leave those there, so I have to fix them in the next chapter, and I don't like it.

So, I thought of doing a poll (I'm not sure you will answer though):

-If you want me, or don't mind me rewriting everything, and starting the novel from scratch, comment in this paragraph.

-If you don't want me to rewrite everything, and just edit some things, comment in this paragraph.

Anyways, I think it's worth mentioning that my position is rewriting everything, but of course, if you vote no, I won't do it.

I will wait some days, maybe a week, for anyone to comment, and after that, I will post another chapter telling the results.

Without anything more to say, I'll see you in the... next chapter?

Para continuar

Calificar este libro

PREV INDEX