A Bored Lich
"Screw magic, I want to learn how to do cool flips and stuff." Magic is awesome, until you've studied it for centuries. Doevm reincarnates into a human to experience the path of a fighter to its fullest and swears not to rely on magic. There is only one problem, a goddess stands in his way. She pits him against both the hero and the villain for all of eternity. How will he escape this, with magic or his fists? Maybe both? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(Sorry about the spacing. Webnovel doesn't let me use enter) Winner of contest #110. I upload three chapters a week. Each chapter has word count around 1000+.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Link to my discord: https://discord.gg/tHaceja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------While I am an experienced writer, I do make mistakes. Don't be afraid to say you don't understand something or point out an error in grammar. I read all comments. There are naturally some things I won't say. For example, if some says there's an inconsistency and I don't address it, it's probably there for a reason.
Whole again
Elero stood in between Kilot and his destroyed forge, yet Doevm didn't share her pity as he looked down at the old Dwarf and said, "As soon as that escape amulet detected a threat, it should have teleported you out of the city, not twenty feet away. My group will get slaughtered if we rely on weak products."
The sudden critique rubbed salt in Kilot's wounds, on the surface. What Doevm actually meant to do was to test Kilot's reaction, because some things still weren't adding up. Irregularities, such as how Kilot was left out in the open for so long, seemed all too pressing. In addition, if the goddess could easily destroy Kilot's forge, why couldn't she blow them up right now? The most important concern, however, was why Kilot was in front of them.
Elero was visibly shocked at Doevm's sudden critiques as she punched him in the shoulder. "Twenty feet or twenty miles, who cares?"