man this story has potential, i like how it is going, the mc is too much hard working to reach his max strength because he knows the world and there is a system assigning him yearly quests to make sure he doesnt get stuck, but its too much AI written with low editing. so so many times same things are repeated again, whole chapters repeated with slight change, could be because of prompt changes. i believe with 1 level of editing (10 mins per chapter), this story can reach at least 80% of its potential, author has good ideas which he is able to put on paper with help of AI but AI has its limits. ill ask everyone to give it a try if only because of how much author is able to churn out in past week. in 1 week of writing, mc has reached age 8 almost chunin
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