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It’s a good story, although author isn’t experienced and it shows a little we all start somewhere, plot is nice and has potential for development. updating schedule is amazingly consistent. Not much people decide to deviate so far from canon and keep minato and kushina alive although I think you went a little too far with genjutsu and seal and could of made it so minato was just a duche while kushina becoming severely weakend due to the nine tails extraction, coulda put her in like a coma and have minato be a village loyal die hard. Grammar needs to be improved as although it’s not too noticeable some mistakes are seen every few sentences. I recomend putting the chapters through ChatGPT and having it edit them while going through them at the end and editing it your self. All in all a good read and good written work for a new writer. 👍🏽

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