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Huh? I means if your into yaoi it’s better you go search that specific genre cause don’t think this is gonna be to your taste since mc obv likes females…
Ngl I read all that and didn’t understand anything I think my brain shor circuited I’ll be back later
Ye I was actually planning on giving him mystic eyes of death perception as it would fit more but I decided to switch it up and use six eyes as I enjoy the abilties and flexibility I can use with it, as for how he acquired it, I think I explained in either a flashback or something about him already having a extremely weakened version of it. Due to some circumstances it had obviously evolved after he arrived in a different world. As for how he even aquired in his past life even if it was a very minor nerfed version I plan to explain that in flashbacks later down the line. As Adams current character is that of a lazy genius who is currently enjoying his newfound freedom, I’ll try to flesh out his thought process more throughout future chapters so it doesn’t just feel like reading a dull robot mc. Lmk if I missed anything, don’t wanna add too much spoilers so kinda limited in what I can say, might also need to re-edit the part about his time like ability to make it more suitable
It’s why I decided to elaborate more on her. Kishi gave us barely anything on most clans and characters, mito only appears briefly so I thought to expand on her character and mesh it out to my liking. I also plan to pay more attention to other clans that got wiped out during/after the warring states. Lmk if you got any feedback tho, always appreciate constructive criticism to improve my writing and story.
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Tbh you keep giving me more ideas for the pairings idk why, but I simply just don’t like Hinata as a pairing for my current Naruto, it would be way to forced to try and make them get together but as I just said you have me some great ideas. I’ll most likely add her little sister Hanabi but obviously would have to make minor adjustments, thinking of making her a twin. Shion as a pairing is also an amazing idea tbh you just gave me at of inspiration with a few words, although Hinata most likely won’t be a pairing due to not only her personality which is quite annoying to play with but also due to her being overused, I don’t see much people doing a Hanabi pairing. I mean have you seen how she looks like in boruto??
Nop def not, so many reasons not to add Hinata. Although… you just gave me an idea, might add a hyuga pairing as well (not Hinata) not sure who tho but since I alr put a uchiha oc I can either make a hyuga oc or use a existing charecter.
Ye that’s what I thought as well but you gotta remember having the nine tails extracted right after she’d given birth definitely had some sever repercussions, I mean we had Naruto who only had half the 9 tails die after after having it extracted (only to be given alien superpowers and come back to life later on) so it would of made more sense for Minato to seal half inside Kushina as although it could be said that she will survive the full 9 tails getting extracted she could of had a chance at living normally if the other half got sealed back into her. Idk it’s just speculation since kishimoto obviously left some plot holes but this is why we got fanfic, gonna take advantage of those plot holes and twist it to suit my story 🤷♂️ Lmk your suggestions on how to better the story— or if you got any questions regarding the story/plot
Bro rlly said Hinata AND Sakura