Review Detail of ACHILLES in Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite)

Haven't read but his last fic was awful and seeing author don't have an "Any question comment" i making a review But is the Mc still too childish and dense. 2 don't be adding too much Ocs they not making the fic or character development. (Opnion based) Don't give the mc op abilitys for him to still end being so weak like the other fic