ACHILLES

can u update it?

yo when did he get to mahouka?

and now we're having oc's more dis shit awful ngl I'm out now gl

and now he's overreacting holy smh

another mess up in here. Oscar would be team leader after the last chapter and an crap ton of spelling errors needs to be fixed

your story is good jst spelling errors. and an awful mc personality

other than that, it's good so far, and it's not too annoying, so I'll stick around ima jst wait till chapters pile up

I believe on how he talks to them, I think I don't remember, but yeah, it makes the mc personality like a horn dog from my perspective.

yh true, but it builds no chemistry or doesn't feel natura, now it feels forced and mc personality is more like issei jst off lust or characters similar to that and they're not liked and more annoying than anything, it's jst advice as I'm sure alot of ppl wouldn't like the mc personality because of that.

is there any character illustrations?