Review Detail of TheGreatQilin in Jeff's Journey

Item: Jeff's Journey
Rating: 5

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TheGreatQilinLv19mthTheGreatQilin

Has great Potential, incredible first chapter

Jeff's Journey

TheGreatPanda

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TheGreatQilinLv1TheGreatQilin

Now that the second chapter is out, I can say it has indeed great potential, but the author really needs to fix his grammar

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TheGreatPandaAutorTheGreatPanda

Yeah thanks for pointing out

TheGreatQilin:Now that the second chapter is out, I can say it has indeed great potential, but the author really needs to fix his grammar
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