TheGreatPanda
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I am a corporate PANDA trying to reach Ascension by READING!!!!MUHAHAHAHA Just kidding (or not?)
2023-12-11 BeigetretenAscension Island
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TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf RandomCitizenTakengood idea thanks!
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf Terance_Ivy
True
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf TheGreatQilin
Yeah thanks for pointing out
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf Terance_Ivy
Jup!
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf Terance_Ivy
Veeery long chapter but in a good way. Nice way to make an info dump without making it boring!
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf TheGreatQilin
Ii completly agree!
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoKommentiert
I think it is effect(I may be wrong) but still good writing
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - TheGreatPanda10 months agoKommentiert
Good cliffhanger
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoKommentiert
An exiting beginning, has good potential but it`s still a bit short. All in all great job for your first story!
- TheGreatPanda10 months agoAntwortet auf Terance_Ivy
It really sounds like a great idea but would it be ok if I first write a bit more?