Review Detail of LastGod in In Marvel with the Perfect Body...

The beginning of this fanfic was very good. Problems started when he was picked up by storm. At points, it seems like he knows Marvel and the characters in it. But forgets them when its convenient for the author to have some fake mystery injected into the story. He has very high IQ but keeps being surprised by his abilities even though he knows he has genes of 3 people who broke past human limits and had almost limitless potential. The frustrating thing is that every time the MC tries to be clever, he opens himself up to manipulation that someone of high IQ would be able to avoid. But as a human, emotional manipulation is still a very real thing, and he can't think his way out of it so he could very easily fall into that by just being friends with some of the xmen. A smart person would understand the character of the person before they become friends. Knowing they would never manipulate you or be around a master manipulator who they owe something to.