Review Detail of FrozenEntropy in The Rich Guy is cursed : Immortal Love

I too am looking forward to more updates! The writing is generally good in terms of its descriptions and dialogue, although sometimes things feel a bit repetitive. I also find the writing to be focused more on telling us things than showing them, especially in moments where we're initially introduced to characters and we're immediately told to think they're smart, beautiful, ect without seeing why we would think of them that way. Don't want to sound negative, those are only minor things I wanted to point out. That doesn't negate the fact that the character's you are introducing are interesting, and the grammar and sentence structuring is on point! Keep it up.