Review Detail of Einstein3 in Bleach: From You to Me
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Look. Most people search for a somewhat creative retelling of what they deem canon. And that's fine. But it's not what they'll find here. The Author dives into and reinvents the past of what we know. He uses superb storytelling and experienced pacing to bring characters to life that we only know the faintest bit about. And I like that. Writing Quality: Simply grand. It's a polished and engaging writing style and I'd very much like to read more of it in other settings.Story Development: The pacing is a bit slow but that's nice since the characters and their interactions feel fantastically alive. He isn't just using a template. He is filling it to the brim and it's overflowing. slowly but surely, this particular iteration of this world will belong to the author.Character Design: We don't know much about those people. Their designs are interesting but there isn't any substance. The Author is changing that. They have their reasons, they learn, they fear, they are alive. And that's what makes this story shine.Updating Stability: We don't have much yet but evidently, the author has already written a fair bit before posting. What is there already is high quality and probably read over and polished several times. It feels like a passion project and I hope it will continue to be one.World Background: He took an already established world and decided to use it as a canvas. If you write fanfiction, you shouldn't keep as close to canon as possible. It's fine to change things around. And that's what's done here. It won't follow any and all official media. This being fanfiction automatically makes it an AU. Taking the bits and pieces one is comfortable with and weaving a story around it is a valid practice.All around, this is a fine piece of fiction and I am enjoying it. It's not for the canon fanatics and those who are hung up with reading about Ichigo and his adventures will have a bit of trouble with this too. If you keep an open mind, however, then you might just see a worthy reinvention of a much beloved universe.
Bleach: From You to Me
AKD_Khmer
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I'm convinced this is the author's alt. Lots of fluff vocabulary, that doesn't describe the content in a genuine manner. It's disingenuous to say it's not a retelling of the canon, and that the Author reinvents the entire story in a positive manner, when the result is horrendous. It's a writer's pride, I suppose. They think they can do better than the source, when they obviously can't. These people are fanfic writers for a reason.tldr; imagine how bad live actions are on average, because directors are not faithful to the source materia. that's how bad this is, just ramp it to a hundred.
I like this story and wrote a review for it...I did that for several other stories too. Since I usually only write those only if a story really scratches an itch, they are usually positive in nature. By your logic, all the other stories I've reviewed were written by me too. Look at the stuff I've written myself. It's really not that good if you compare it with this one. Neither is my writing in any way notable in comparison to the other stories I've reviewed. I guess I should take your words as a compliment, but this here being the alt (or the other way around, dunno which account is older) simply isn't true. Thanks for taking the time to throw around baseless accusations though. It's always fun reading those.
Stray99th:I'm convinced this is the author's alt. Lots of fluff vocabulary, that doesn't describe the content in a genuine manner. It's disingenuous to say it's not a retelling of the canon, and that the Author reinvents the entire story in a positive manner, when the result is horrendous. It's a writer's pride, I suppose. They think they can do better than the source, when they obviously can't. These people are fanfic writers for a reason.tldr; imagine how bad live actions are on average, because directors are not faithful to the source materia. that's how bad this is, just ramp it to a hundred.
Yo btw I apologize about the vocab situation. Realized I over did it in some places. It's a good thing this is my first fanfic! Unlike yours... lol
Stray99th:I'm convinced this is the author's alt. Lots of fluff vocabulary, that doesn't describe the content in a genuine manner. It's disingenuous to say it's not a retelling of the canon, and that the Author reinvents the entire story in a positive manner, when the result is horrendous. It's a writer's pride, I suppose. They think they can do better than the source, when they obviously can't. These people are fanfic writers for a reason.tldr; imagine how bad live actions are on average, because directors are not faithful to the source materia. that's how bad this is, just ramp it to a hundred.
AKD_Khmer:Yo btw I apologize about the vocab situation. Realized I over did it in some places. It's a good thing this is my first fanfic! Unlike yours... lol