Stray99th

so I don't have to read about an overpowered mc killing everyone and messing up key plots only for the writer to have no clue what to do in the subsequent chapters? perfect.

Is this sarcastic? that sounds like awful writing. lol

>A fresh new take >Saves Uchiha >Does everything every fanfic does kill yourself.

no it's not. he can do nothing and things will turn out favorably. I hate mcs with saviour complexes, like the characters won't be fine if they don't tamper with the plot. every fanfic with an mc that isn't stupidly op at some point should realistically ended up with the mc being dead. naruto villains aren't stupid, zetsu isn't stupid, obito isn't stupid.

Ah, 'parasitic', what a delightful word to throw around without actually understanding it. So, let me get this straight, harem is a "parasitic genre" because, what, it builds on an existing trope? That's how genres work, genius. By your logic, every mystery novel is parasitic on Sherlock Holmes, and every fantasy novel is leeching off Tolkien. Good luck defending that one. And do you genuinely think every single harem novel is just about an overpowered protagonist collecting women like Pokémon??? You do realize harem stories can vary wildly in depth and tone, right? Not every one of them is an "enslaved harem," unless, of course, you've just been skimming the trashier end of the pool. Newsflash, readers aren’t dumb, and harem novels aren’t some sinister plot to glorify unhealthy relationships, they're often explorations of human connection, choice, and, yes, sometimes power dynamics. But sure, reduce an entire genre to your oversimplified, edgy hot take.

These dialogues are getting really cringe. There isn't much depth or substance to the conversations. It's just a wall of meaningless text. I can literally just skim through 90% of chapter and it will only serve to make the reading experience better. It's been like this for the past 40 chapters or so, but it's getting even more tedious the later the chapters.

This caught me off guard. Pretty well-written.

*haven't read a single chapter* for the people who have read to this point, does he save the Uchiha? because I'm not going to invest on a fanfic that alters crucial points of the story too much. I don't think fanfic writers are capable of keeping their stories logical after a huge split from the original. I'm here to see if it's a story worth investing votes on

Absolute freaking cinema.

Harem is a genre, hating a genre is not grounds for criticism. You're the one trying to sound sophisticated by avoiding casual vocabulary when the content of your comment itself is nothing but brainless babble. Pseudointellectual tumor.