Review Detail of Darkfire32 in The Aurora Plains

This is my creation , so of course I an not gonna give my self a bad review. I know I'm lacking in some areas but I will get better. All in all , if you kept reading until chapter three you will notice the improvement. Here is my review to myself : -The world building is good. -The story is excellent. -The writing style need improvements. -Spelling mistakes close to none, you may find some here and there. [img=update]