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Daddy
DaddyAutor1yr
2023-08-08 07:56

Don't mind me. Just giving the obligatory 5 star review. This story is a Gamer OC story set in a HP AU (aged up characters, some genderswaps, and expanded magic). It won't be an OP gamer. The focus of the story is mainly on the process of grinding skills and stats, along with the harem aspect of it.

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

Daddy
4.6
78 Chs

Beliebt bei 42 Personen

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Antworten17
Chill_Narwhal
Chill_NarwhalLv13

I mean if your other two stories are any indication then a 5 star is well deserved

1yr
3
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

no reincarnation (plus) slow update...... also gender bender and story is still going strong, it seems it has some hidden element which people call - harem

1yr
6
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

UmU 😌

1yr
9
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

Young_fruit_Smiley:no reincarnation (plus) slow update...... also gender bender and story is still going strong, it seems it has some hidden element which people call - harem
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1yr
1
LuciFer_Kardam
LuciFer_KardamLv4

so true

Wesley_Hylry:UmU 😌
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1yr
2
RcMartone
RcMartoneLv4

If it's Gamer Fanfic, it's OP regardless of what you do, otherwise, use "Gamer Elements" so it would make more sense for you to nerf one of the most ridiculous systems ever created by writers, gamer system is something ridiculous in any reality in which it is placed , it's impossible not to be OP, if it's not OP, it's just because the author used "elements" from the gamer system.

1yr
4
ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

is there gonna be any sauce?

1yr
Cryzy_Blade
Cryzy_BladeLv3

I truly hope you finish this book. I love essence of meta cyoa but sadly you dropped it and you dropped all your other ones as well. i hope you can finish this one since it's written even better than the previous ones.

1yr
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan

1yr
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Hey bro, look at the author's previous works.

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan
1yr
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

ah I saw the description of one of the books thanks for telling me

FinnsRevenge:Hey bro, look at the author's previous works.
1yr
1
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR:ah I saw the description of one of the books thanks for telling me
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1yr
2
BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv15

yo author is the story done? it's obviously still uploading lol but I went to your pat and saw I think 41? said epilogue? just making sure

11mth
iLeech
iLeechLv4

Which is why I avoid them like a plague. Aside from the OG, i.e. The Gamer (webtoon,) which I had read because since I had found the idea novel at the time, the rest are very boring.

RcMartone:If it's Gamer Fanfic, it's OP regardless of what you do, otherwise, use "Gamer Elements" so it would make more sense for you to nerf one of the most ridiculous systems ever created by writers, gamer system is something ridiculous in any reality in which it is placed , it's impossible not to be OP, if it's not OP, it's just because the author used "elements" from the gamer system.
11mth
Sir_Leirkazz
Sir_LeirkazzLv13

4mth
Villain_God
Villain_GodLv12

is there yuri??

2mth
Villain_God
Villain_GodLv12

not yuri yuri but where the mc's girls go yuri

Villain_God:is there yuri??
2mth
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LostM
LostMLv5

I saw grind and my first thought was Harry Squatter.

1yr

Tales_de_Mileto
Tales_de_MiletoLv1

good god another of these "Japanese MC" denseness...

1yr
Siuuu
SiuuuLv4

I just read upto 3 chapters and i wanted to drop this novel more than ten times. like this is annoying and typical brainless novel. Mc is foodless,homeless-penniless, everything less and a crybaby, like with magic at least you won't be starved you can conjure water and atleast work in muggle world or do small jobs in magical world but no MC is an idiot. Don't waste your time in this novel.

1yr
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

he plot and writing itself is good. character conversation isn't too rigid or bland, there's some progress for sure but can't talk much about character development since it's only 4 chapter.but this author feels like reading too much Japanese LN, y'all know how Japanese MC are, low eq, dense etc. but at least there's some progress on it like I said before, and it's still 4 chapter. so you may like it, or maybe you wouldn't.. I know I wouldn't since I hate that kind of MC

1yr
DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

One of the worst MCs in any Harry Potter fanfic story that I have ever read. Pathetic, dumb, super beta MC so do not bother unless you love stories like that.

1yr
Obsideon
ObsideonLv4

For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support For support, For support , For support

1yr
Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3

I would like to like this story but the mc is way to passive and easily dominated by all the girls with romantic interest in him. They just push him around an he accepts it like it’s normal. Everything he does is because of the girls.

12mth
literl010
literl010Lv1

Initially I'd given this a 3.5 review and dropped it at chapter 4, put off by the excessive denseness of the protagonist, but someone recommended I revisit it and I'm really glad I did. He remains dense, but it does start getting better and less of a problem. I think part of the issue was I feel the author sometimes labors the foreshadowing a bit too much, further emphasizing the myriad of things the protagonist misses and amplifying his perceived level of denseness, which had really started to grate on me. However, I think this has started getting better and is more balanced in the more recent chapters. That is the only real criticism I can draw, everything else from the fun twist on the system premise, the plot, characterization, word choice, grammar, and long chapters are all fantastic. If like me you're put off by the protagonist at first, definitely try to stick with it. I don't think you'll be disappointed with the current trajectory. Whilst I still have some doubts as I'm still not that keen on this brand of comedy, I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1yr
Twasasetup
TwasasetupLv2

Some random guy gets the gamer system and starts banging all the chicks while claiming to have some inexplicable bond to each and everyone of them since their first meeting. The End.

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