Review Detail of Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809 in The fortuners

WRITING QUALITY IS GOOD BUT YOU FOCUS MORE ON EMOTIONS OF CHARACTERS . NOW THE DEVELOPMENT OF STORY IS AWSOME BUT THE THING WE NEED IN MORE DETAIL IS THE WORLDS IMAGE THE WORLD YOU HAD EXPRESSED IN FIRST CHAPTER I AM JUST WAITING FOR THE MASKMAN BECAUSE WHAT A CHARACTER DESIGN IS IT JUST AMAZING .KEEP IT UP WRITING QUALITY AND WORLD BACKGROUND IS THE THING YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON BUT THERE ARE SOME LINES THAT ARE MY FAVORITE ESPACIALLY THE MASKMAN LASTEST LINES