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2023-08-04 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
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    Wow ,now finally the story is taking turnes and twistes iam further more curious about wolf Empire

    Ch 10 Protopia :
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
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    WRITING QUALITY IS GOOD BUT YOU FOCUS MORE ON EMOTIONS OF CHARACTERS . NOW THE DEVELOPMENT OF STORY IS AWSOME BUT THE THING WE NEED IN MORE DETAIL IS THE WORLDS IMAGE THE WORLD YOU HAD EXPRESSED IN FIRST CHAPTER I AM JUST WAITING FOR THE MASKMAN BECAUSE WHAT A CHARACTER DESIGN IS IT JUST AMAZING .KEEP IT UP WRITING QUALITY AND WORLD BACKGROUND IS THE THING YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON BUT THERE ARE SOME LINES THAT ARE MY FAVORITE ESPACIALLY THE MASKMAN LASTEST LINES

    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
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    I THINK THESE ARE THE STONGEST LINES BY STRONGEST CHARACTER

    There is no sword that can withstand my enmity ♡" He went saying in a cold voice.
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
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    really

    " There is no friend to be friend with me ,
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
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    O my God he should be the villan what a character just amazing

    Ch 6 The maskman
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
    Kommentiert

    i think Aroxin is the main character

    Ch 4 Aroxin
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
    Kommentiert

    I can guess that this story will spread fire all around

    Ch 3 The infamous one
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
    Kommentiert

    I can guess that this story will spread fire all around

    Ch 3 The infamous one
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail
  • Muhammad_Sheeraz_0809
    Muhammad_Sheeraz_080910mth
    Kommentiert

    AMAZING STORY. i was so scared about the girl but then it was a dream and what kind of world is this i just wanna to know more about this world

    Ch 2 Dream or not ?
    The fortuners
    Fantasie · Pakeeza_Rani
    detail