Review Detail of Lazy_Fox111 in Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)

Item: Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)
Rating: 3

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Lazy_Fox111Lv411mthLazy_Fox111

Proofread your own work and you'll see the issues yourself. The fic severely lacks in contexts and the grammar needs some work. It has potential and could live up to it if it was properly revised.

Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)

Schooldean

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Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

There's more, the characters' portrayal and interactions are two dimensional.

11mth

SchooldeanAutorSchooldean

That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]

11mth

Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

I think it's already obvious so there's no need to point it out other than the issues that needs to be prioritized first, at least in my opinion.

Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]

11mth

ZEINOMLv1ZEINOM

uses chatgpt for grammar correction and sentence formulation

Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]

11mth

Genn_starsLv3Genn_stars

could use chatgpt or grammarly.

Schooldean:That's like asking a blind guy to help another blind guy cross the road. You have killed two people! Here's a thing I should tell you. My English sucks because I have another home language I only use English when I'm trying to convince my supervisor I'm gona need a day off.About my character's relationships or interactions with others. [img=update]

6mth