Review Detail of Fujiashi in Underneath the Silhouette

Shameless author review! I honestly enjoy writing this and I really want to finish this. I can't explain how fond I am of fantasy romance stories and enemies to lovers to boot! I know that I am still lacking in some areas which is why I appreciate honest criticisms that could help me improve. Thank you! I hope you all can enjoy this like how I do ｡⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠｡