This story looks promising. The synopsis has a great hook and the story itself is fantastic. Although I am not fond of the systems genre, I could try this one. The first few chapters are kind of short for me, but overall it has a great start and a good feel to it.

The synopsis seems a little dull, but the first chapter looks promising. I can see the potential and you really have to read the first chapters first before judging.

This is actually a great book with detailed descriptions and vivid portrayals of the character and the world, although I wasn't fond of the synopsis, it was too wordy for me. But overall, this has a great start.

In Japanese, Ei means "eternal" and Rin means "Jewel".

I don't usually read Eastern Fantasy, but this is nicely written, although the first few chapters aren't captivating enough for me. Also, there are some confusing ways in which the author used quotation marks. But overall, I think this is good for those Eastern fantasy fans out there. Give it a read!

It was a little confusing at first because there wasn't anything mentioned about the setting, and the subtleness made me clueless. But after you get into the second chapter, the dialogues are great and captivating, it will make you continue reading it. Great job!

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It's interesting how well-written this is. Just by the first chapter, you can already see the potential and excitement it'll bring. I love this!

Top notch world building and the description is superb! The author's really focusing on showing the readers everything, but it started to get dull for me. There wasn't much action in the first chapters. I don't read Eastern fantasy so I'm not sure if that's how it should be. But for me, the vivid description wasn't enough to keep me. Still a great read! I'll recommend this!

Whoa, sassy

What an old man 🫢

The description is really top-notch!

So this is from the future? Am I understanding things right?

Ah, this is the prison that I know.

So that's why!

That's a great prison right there

Now I'm envious (⁠っ⁠˘̩⁠╭⁠╮⁠˘̩⁠)⁠っ