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I hope you guys like it. It is my first try at writing so do give me some slack while reading it.

Marvel: Reborn as Moon Knight

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hizer0778
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is there romance and is it harem

White_Wolf_7506
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I have not yet decided about romance but if it will be, I will do a poll regarding the harem and no harem route.

OdTA
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Please no romance and harem. It's really repetitive in the marvel & dc fanfics.

TheRamenLord
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please no harem, if the MC is moon knight then Layla from the tv show is a perfect love interest. Just a suggestion.

White_Wolf_7506:I have not yet decided about romance but if it will be, I will do a poll regarding the harem and no harem route.
ShadowOrigin
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It is great but there is a problem. You are writing like this " I look at him. I sat down. I put on a cold front and glare. etc " But do not specify Who is this "I". It would be great if you do this

Genn_stars
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pointless, harem will win and one of two things will happen: either you honor the poll and give MC a harem which since its your first time writing will ruin the story, or you realize that it will ruin your story and just go with wife and maybe kids ignoring the poll.

White_Wolf_7506:I have not yet decided about romance but if it will be, I will do a poll regarding the harem and no harem route.
Genn_stars
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If you want to skip all that, ask yourself: Can I write a story about a man who can actually be that emotionally connected to many people and not only be happy but have a career as a vigilante at the same time?, Do I even want that? How can I justify said relationship without sounding like a Chinese Author saying ' A powerful man can't be restricted to a single woman '?

White_Wolf_7506:I have not yet decided about romance but if it will be, I will do a poll regarding the harem and no harem route.
Gulf_Alpha_Yankee
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Tigercat129
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Please make more real good