webnovel
Rubi_Stone
Rubi_StoneLv11yr
2023-06-06 16:25

A very poorly managed story. Author has no knowledge how to start (only a tiny idea about "it should be intresting to write") or what to make for keeping his readers interested. And I don't even mention writing quality (such crazy sentences that you doubt author even having basic logic). Maybe, after a few years of work on this story, could bring it ro the list of decent ones, but for now it's utter garbage

The north

Th3_C4t
Not enough ratings
90 Chs

Liked it!

LIKE
Replies1
Th3_C4t
Th3_C4tAuthor

Thanks for the review and I would like to contradict you, but obviously the first volume is just as you described. The ideas were there, but I didn't know how to manage them and about the grammar I don't deny it, my main language is not English making sentences or expressions confusing going through the translator. Still, thanks for the review!

1yr
1
Related Stories

Genshin Impact : Sorry can't be there till the end

Original work: https://www.ciweimao.com/book/100348111 Discord server: https://discord.gg/pWRPkevZvq Five hundred years ago. Raiden Ei looked down at the young man in the courtyard and said indifferently: "Heh, a mortal... To 'eternity', it's just a fleeting life... Well, well, I'll keep you company for a while." Five hundred years later. On the sickbed. "Waaah, you bastard, hang in there! Don't die!!" - The small tree planted for many years, watered day and night, never to see it flourish, Dying the night before the loved one returns from studies, A person and a god, both full of hope yet growing apart, unable to wait for the day she emerges from the Pure Land and opens her heart. Feeding fried tofu for many years, the little fox grows into a big fox, while I slowly age, no longer able to hold kitchen utensils. Sacred cherry blossoms, waka poems, plum wine and snacks, sardines and salt, the shrine covered in fallen red petals, summer promises, I can't keep our date again. Wishing to buy osmanthus and share wine, but I depart as an old friend. In the end, it's not like the youth's journey. Human life has its limits. "Companionship is the most enduring confession—but I'm sorry, as a mortal, I can't always say: 'I love you'."​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

CrepveantWynn · Video Games
4.7
53 Chs

Steel Waste

A teenager had just purchased a bundle of all of the new and old Fallout games, Fallout 76 had just been released and he'd been badgered by his friends to play it... As a diligent person he decided that the best way to get acquainted with the series was to play ALL OF THEM! It'd taken him three days to complete Fallout 3, doing most of the side quests and exploring the Capital Wasteland. It'd been an extremely fun experience, even if the graphics were dated at the time... He didn't wait a moment after completing it, immediately putting in the Fallout Newvegas disk into his console... When the exhaustion finally caught up to him. Opening his eyes again and realising he was now a baby had him regretting ever laying hands on the series. Thus begins the story of his adventure through the Mojave wasteland. This is my new Fanfic after finishing https://www.webnovel.com/book/elder-blood-witcher_15882698206325105 The schedule will be at least two a day unless extraneous circumstances hold it up. Join my Discord! : https://discord.gg/mG4vG5SUbF If you like my content, want to read ahead, or just want to support my work then I'd appreciate it you visited my Patreon : https://www.patreon.com/Nagross

Niggross · Video Games
4.6
709 Chs

Minecraft: loading new world

Welcome to Minecraft, a world of blocks and endless adventures at your fingertips. ___________________ What would our Main Character do once he realized the he is in a video game with different logic from his own world. Will he try to get back? Will the Viligers keep him away from the arms of loneliness? Or will he die in the first night to zombies? Let's follow him to find out about his adventures in another world, in another life. __________________ The book is about a Man who woke up in the world of Minecraft, but not the Vanilla Minecraft, this world has a system, and some things may be changed in comparison with the original, the world is corrupted, so once a year a player is brought into the world that further corrupts the world.

EnderStar · Video Games
4.5
186 Chs

Selling Mobile Phones In Genshin Impact, Everyone Is Livestreaming

Klee: "Ta-da! Klee's gonna perform fish-blasting with Jumpy Dumpty!" Captain Jean entered the live broadcast. "To...today Klee is...is here to tell...tell you all a story about a girl who loves blowing up fish!" Hu Tao: "Hehe, I am Hu Tao, the Seventy-Seventh Director of Wangsheng Funeral Parlor. For any funeral-related business, please remember to contact this humble director! Oh right, followers get a 20% discount and a bonus luxurious funeral service!" Qiqi: "Qiqi does not want to stream!" Hu Tao swiftly embraced Qiqi and ran towards Wuwang Hill. "Hehe, sorry, but it's not your choice today!" "Our broadcaster has captured a live zombie for everyone today. Everyone, type 'Protect Wangsheng Funeral Parlor' in the chat - hehe!" Very Chatty Cloud Retainer: "Give me a follow, and I'll share stories about Ganyu from her childhood in Liyue!" Arataki Itto: "Welcome to the Arataki Gang! Watch me devour a pig in three bites - don't stop those tips coming!" Yoimiya: "Thanking Traveler for the rocket tip! Hm, let me show you how to make rockets now!" Paimon aimed the phone at Zhongli, her expression sly. "Emperor, surely you wouldn't want others knowing you're still alive, would you?!" Main Characters: Lin Feng, Eula *** Please support me on Patreon, where you can read a bunch of extra chapters, not just for this novel, but for all the novels I'm translating. I upload at least 2 times daily for each novel (meaning there are at least twice as many chapters on Patreon compared to here on Webnovel). https://www.pat reon.com/ThatGreatStuff

ThatGoodStuff · Video Games
Not enough ratings
99 Chs

Labyrinth Hunter - Book II: SUBMERGED

Discord: https://discord.gg/SCHfnFbdNH Patreon: patreon.com/DPSHealer Without knowing how it happened, a young engineer died. He only realized that he was reborn in another world as Regulus Danwshield and as a half-vampire. Soon enough, Regulus realized that he wasn't born in an ordinary world. It was a massive world that had a system that everyone had access to, in this world, many species of beings existed, and being a hybrid between two of them, he was hated by most more than a little bit. His father is a war hero who is distant since he is only the tenth son, he never talked about his mother, too. His stepmothers and siblings made him realize for almost a decade how much they hated him. Still, Regulus spent those ten years waiting for his chance to be free. After an attack on his bedroom, he put his plans into action to explore this world and live as his own person, just like Regulus. However, for as long as he lives, he had to keep his origin hidden. Otherwise, there will be no end to the amount of people who will target his life... with that in mind, Regulus has to travel around the world, searching for power inside dungeons and labyrinths and unlocking classes at their depths. What to expect: - An MC who likes to travel and explore dungeons and labyrinths to gain more classes. He also wants to combine his knowledge and the magic from that world to create all kinds of things from Earth and even beyond Earth's technology. - A world and a system that keeps expanding according to the exploration of the MC. The system can keep growing because the parameters can only increase when the people in this world unlock the classes that grants them the said parameter. - Massive World Building. - LitRPG elements. - 2000~2500 daily words.

DPSHealer · Video Games
Not enough ratings
13 Chs
Login