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DaoistTZjcde
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2022-12-30 13:06

Great approach here , starting with a different and interesting development. Looking forward to it. Hey by the way, author are you hona continue the " MCU : Hanma " story , cause i kinda liked it

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Online_Writer
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Eh, I don't know. I was pretty edgy when I started writing that story, so I don't think I could go back to it unless I did a re-write and for now this current fanfic has my undivided attention. Thanks for the review.

Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5

Is it a harem

Online_Writer:Eh, I don't know. I was pretty edgy when I started writing that story, so I don't think I could go back to it unless I did a re-write and for now this current fanfic has my undivided attention. Thanks for the review.
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

can you make it so he eventually evolves his bloodline to legendary super sayjin by using ikari so many times that each his s-cells would mutate slowly until it reached a amount that they ate his other s-cells to become mutated s-cells of regular ssj cells

Online_Writer:Eh, I don't know. I was pretty edgy when I started writing that story, so I don't think I could go back to it unless I did a re-write and for now this current fanfic has my undivided attention. Thanks for the review.
SAURON_
SAURON_Lv2

also can love interest be raven/Rachel Roth since mc can fight trigon and "beat" him

Online_Writer:Eh, I don't know. I was pretty edgy when I started writing that story, so I don't think I could go back to it unless I did a re-write and for now this current fanfic has my undivided attention. Thanks for the review.
Online_Writer
Online_WriterAuthor

I was thinking of having him try out Ikari, so this might play in pretty well. It would take a while for such a massive change though and not just a few times in the Ikari state and then bam, Legendary Super Saiyan.

SAURON_:can you make it so he eventually evolves his bloodline to legendary super sayjin by using ikari so many times that each his s-cells would mutate slowly until it reached a amount that they ate his other s-cells to become mutated s-cells of regular ssj cells
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Online_Writer
Online_WriterAuthor

I'm undecided. I'll most likely do a poll if I continue to be indecisive.

Dieudonner_17:Is it a harem
Online_Writer
Online_WriterAuthor

I don't know, man. Raven/Rachel Roth is pretty overdone at this point and as much as I love hot goth/demon girls, I don't wanna be too unoriginal lol. Either way I'll see how the story plays out and if I feel like they'd make a good pair.

SAURON_:also can love interest be raven/Rachel Roth since mc can fight trigon and "beat" him
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Nico_bolas
Nico_bolasLv13

You could always do death of the endless

Online_Writer:I don't know, man. Raven/Rachel Roth is pretty overdone at this point and as much as I love hot goth/demon girls, I don't wanna be too unoriginal lol. Either way I'll see how the story plays out and if I feel like they'd make a good pair.
Nico_bolas
Nico_bolasLv13

Online_Writer:I don't know, man. Raven/Rachel Roth is pretty overdone at this point and as much as I love hot goth/demon girls, I don't wanna be too unoriginal lol. Either way I'll see how the story plays out and if I feel like they'd make a good pair.
Online_Writer
Online_WriterAuthor

Doesn't she kill anything she touches? I could just be imagining that though. Even if she doesn't, I don't think the MC is anywhere near strong enough to think about being with her lol.

Nico_bolas:You could always do death of the endless
Nico_bolas
Nico_bolasLv13

I’m pretty sure she can control that and yeah I guess he isn’t in the same ball park as her power wise maybe if he went super Saiyan god or something

Online_Writer:Doesn't she kill anything she touches? I could just be imagining that though. Even if she doesn't, I don't think the MC is anywhere near strong enough to think about being with her lol.
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