I like the fact that theirs no unnecessary prologue and jumps right in with the revenge. Powers are defined enough to understand and not to confusing and out of the realm of understanding. The mentality of the mc was a little too far gone for my comfort, with who he killed, but I got over it. Overall I enjoyed where the stories at, and hope for an story arc soon, to really get into it since theirs not enough to go on since theirs only 5 chapters. Hope for more!
Just_XD
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MÖGENGh0st00:dude's just another freaking psycho I'm not going to read an MC that just kills everybody like he feels like
HSG_1999:Honestly it’s hard to find good fan fics after a while on Webnovel, so I take what I can get.image
I hate it so much. every story that isn't a trash Chinese novel where the mc has 78 wives and 1011 girlfriends is a trash novel with Grammar so bad it feels like you're reading the diary of a 12th century French peasant and very very rarely You'll find a novel with a good idea, semi-good grammar, semi-good character design, semi-good world background, and consistent writing there's 5 chapters and they are all from 3 years ago.
HSG_1999:Honestly it’s hard to find good fan fics after a while on Webnovel, so I take what I can get.image