Review Detail of CruelReality in Bleach: New Order

The premise is good, and the author has some interesting idea. However, the grammar is poor enough that I find it difficult to enjoy reading this story. It isn’t as bad as MTL, and the story might be worth trying to see if it bothers you. However, it was enough that I cannot read this nor can I reccomend it in good conscience. 4.3/10.