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Bleach: New Order

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What is Bleach: New Order

Lesen Sie den Roman Bleach: New Order des Autors Ayries_Jesea, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.In short a guy reincarnated to bleach with the quirk New Order.And please don't read this if you don't like MCs who makes dumb mistake, and expect him to be some kind of badass only to complain becaus...

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In short a guy reincarnated to bleach with the quirk New Order. And please don't read this if you don't like MCs who makes dumb mistake, and expect him to be some kind of badass only to complain because you didn't get what you expect. Honestly my brain hurts how many complaints on how stupid the MC or how he doesn't utilize his full abilities like they expect it to be some kind of omnipotent ability, when it's not. You people need to learn the value of equivalent exchange, as there is no such thing as powerful ability that has no cost, and yes I also know that there are some abilities like that but this story has none of it. And I write this for myself and not for specific person, you like it then you like it, if not then stop. I want to make this a single partner, maybe two English is not my first language, so you can expect some poor grammar, but I'm working on it Everything about this fanfic except for some OCS and maybe some ideas are not mine and belongs to their respective owners. The picture is also not mine This is my second fanfic, and I might not be able to post regularly due to class hope you guys like it.

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Ayries_Jesea
Ayries_JeseaAutorAyries_Jesea

I know my fic isn't perfect, but it's still 5 star for me

Erl_Rol
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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv4CruelReality

The premise is good, and the author has some interesting idea. However, the grammar is poor enough that I find it difficult to enjoy reading this story. It isn’t as bad as MTL, and the story might be worth trying to see if it bothers you. However, it was enough that I cannot read this nor can I reccomend it in good conscience. 4.3/10.

Longyunson
LongyunsonLv1Longyunson

Story that promises a Bleach fanfic with MHA and delivers none of that. The protagonist is a reincarnated adult but has zero development in over 25 chapters. Bleach characters are only present in the name because apparently, according to the author, it makes more sense to create an OC than to use them (this OC is the love interest, but rest assured, you don't care about her because the author forces a drama to try to give importance - but without success). Finally, the author is a hypocrite who keeps making excuses and not deleting the honest review or making one more excuse in the comments, since that's all he knows how to do...

ReficulsRegret
ReficulsRegretLv1ReficulsRegret

Author doesn't understand how new order works 1. You can only have 2 orders as your limit no matter what. 2. Requirement to using a order is to both touch the object and say it's name . On a living target with a sense of self the user target identity has to align with their own .you can't just go up to nel and say I order nelliel to drop dead since she has amnesia. 3. If the user says they want to have white hair with one order and red eyes with the other you can longer impose another order untill one is cancelled hence returning the hair or eye color back to it's original color . No new order is not omnipotent, no order can be permanent without it using a slot. there is limit to what it can do you can't ask for infinite reiastu . Sorry for the wall of text but I haven't slept and don't feel like doing proper writing

T0birama_Uchiha
T0birama_UchihaLv4T0birama_Uchiha

i feel frustrated that thec doesnt use his brain. he had no progress in 6 years. lots of chapters that have no story development. if you want 5o read. turn of your brain.

ywhy4_
ywhy4_Lv4ywhy4_

this is good and all but this is too boring for me ✌️ Peace out

Iam_Handsome100
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Reekids
ReekidsLv4Reekids

This fanfic is very good for the moment, apart from a little grammar, all is well. Exp exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp exp

Alchemist
AlchemistLv13Alchemist

MC is supposed to be a reincarnated adult, but he just acts like a particularly stupid and cowardly toddler. He just makes one stupid decision after another.

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1GodOfLight

Story that promises a Bleach fanfic with MHA and delivers none of that. The protagonist is a reincarnated adult but has zero development in over 25 chapters. Bleach characters are only present in the name because apparently, according to the author, it makes more sense to create an OC than to use them (this OC is the love interest, but rest assured, you don't care about her because the author forces a drama to try to give importance - but without success). Finally, the author is a hypocrite who keeps making excuses and not deleting the honest review or making one more excuse in the comments, since that's all he knows how to do...

Hydie_Manny
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Josefs012
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Ren_AshBell
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Omori101
Omori101Lv13Omori101

I really like the story, especially the motivation for the mc to grow stronger 💪[img=recommend]

Linked_Lord
Linked_LordLv1Linked_Lord

Not perfect but not the worst by a long shot , i think the sort of powers the mc has are really broken but they aren't the strongest in the verse , so he has to use them atleast semi creatively as it goes on , which works more than just give mc all the powers because "that's cool ", idk if it was accidental but i enjoy that. I do think the story gets hung up on random details often , but it is absolutely fine .

ShinyDragon_UBW
ShinyDragon_UBWLv4ShinyDragon_UBW

it's good story. keep it up. looking forward to reading it.

Yuhji
YuhjiLv2Yuhji

The idea is good and the author knows how to use it very well... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Ibrahim_NiR
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Zen_Kyle
Zen_KyleLv4Zen_Kyle

it's definitely not perfect specially on beginning chapters the mc is very frustrating but it progress very well on later chapters, that said can you please rework the earlier chapter or most readers will be descourage before they could even reach the best parts. PS. welcome back

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