Review Detail of simp212 in A Swallow's Path
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the good, the bad, the meh. the good: 1. it's really well written, by that i mean the words are a bit "poetic" like a normal piece of fictional novel, unlike most of the stories here, whichis quite nice. 2. the "progression" of the plot is natural, like there's a reason ciri is there, notjust because she's there because the autbor wants mc to f her. the meh: 1. the author's a siimp, not the mc(at least not yet), but the author. if you read it, you can tell his bias against ciri. 2. now i might be a bit biassed here, but i hate when author does 3rd pov, yet they saw a character's thoughts on the dialog format instead of good ol exposition. i mean if you want to do that, justuse a 1st pov, or switch between scenes. the bad: 1. i don't know if it's just me, but the story... just don't really hook me, maybe I was thrown off by that prologue, but who knows. 2. in the prologue, the mc suddenly thought of something that feels like the author just ripped it from the wiki, andpaste it to become mc's thoughts, it just threw me off a little, likeat least make it like he's talking to himself, not thinking about it to tell the reader about the lore. --- there's one more about the author suddenly name dropping ciri without her introducing herself, but I don't know where to out put it tbh. overall, an average to decent story, should read it to see if it fits your taste.
A Swallow's Path
Pythia
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do you even know how to write reviews? there are several categories of stars, i simply rated them based on my opinion, or do you also feel a sense of entitlement with my train of thoughts? reviews are opinions, based on how readers like it and don't like, while ratings are a quantifier based on the site spesification , i put 5 stars in writing quality because the grammar and wording are perfect, but I also put 3 stars in story quality and character development because the story bores me and I see no significant trait of the mc has that appeals to me. is it that hard to understand?
SwanDive:So. How does that add to three stars when the only downsides you mentioned are either personal preference that holds no relevance to the book’s quality or something minor they can fix in less than 10 minutes? From your good segment that’s already 4 stars compared to the trash on this site imo.
Bruh. I’ve read your comments in the book and it says everything. How is comforting someone who’s slowly breaking down result in them being a simp? Character development in a slow burn/ paced story when there’s not even 10 chapters released. You just seem to be criticising for the sake of criticising. Very sad sight to see.
simp212:do you even know how to write reviews? there are several categories of stars, i simply rated them based on my opinion, or do you also feel a sense of entitlement with my train of thoughts? reviews are opinions, based on how readers like it and don't like, while ratings are a quantifier based on the site spesification , i put 5 stars in writing quality because the grammar and wording are perfect, but I also put 3 stars in story quality and character development because the story bores me and I see no significant trait of the mc has that appeals to me. is it that hard to understand?
you the author's alt account or something? I said that because at that point it's a bit annoying how the author have a clear bias towards ciri, how he clearly have a crush on the fictional character, how clear the reason he wrote this story IS because of ciri. and for a guy who strongly recomends that authors shouldn't do romance, you seem awfully bent on defending it, but i guess I do see that the romance is kinda good, compared to other story in this site at least.
SwanDive:Bruh. I’ve read your comments in the book and it says everything. How is comforting someone who’s slowly breaking down result in them being a simp? Character development in a slow burn/ paced story when there’s not even 10 chapters released. You just seem to be criticising for the sake of criticising. Very sad sight to see.
Bro? Have you read that book where my review says to stop romance? He says to Scathach when he already has a gf let’s be lovers and her response was “ok” I’m just defending something I think is stupid criticism. You said the mc was a simp because he hugged a girl who was crying over the dead body of a little girl…seriously man?
simp212:you the author's alt account or something? I said that because at that point it's a bit annoying how the author have a clear bias towards ciri, how he clearly have a crush on the fictional character, how clear the reason he wrote this story IS because of ciri. and for a guy who strongly recomends that authors shouldn't do romance, you seem awfully bent on defending it, but i guess I do see that the romance is kinda good, compared to other story in this site at least.
do you not read my comment? i said that not because of the situation, but because of the author's view of ciri as a whole, he clearly has a crush on the fictional character, i mean, look at the descriptions from the chapters before, and i'm annoyed by it.
SwanDive:Bro? Have you read that book where my review says to stop romance? He says to Scathach when he already has a gf let’s be lovers and her response was “ok” I’m just defending something I think is stupid criticism. You said the mc was a simp because he hugged a girl who was crying over the dead body of a little girl…seriously man?
You mean a detailed narrative description of a female lead... I took inspiration from multiple romance novels from top selling authors and then wrote my own based around the female lead of my story... There's a romance tag in a 3rd person story, what do you expect my friend? Also the huge x Ciri in the synopsis? Or the fact she's on the cover...Or that my account name is Ciri? In my experience reviews are subjective to the work and it's quality but i pinned yours anyway. Thanks for your criticism but please shush.
simp212:do you not read my comment? i said that not because of the situation, but because of the author's view of ciri as a whole, he clearly has a crush on the fictional character, i mean, look at the descriptions from the chapters before, and i'm annoyed by it.
oh wow so that was your alt account. anyway, in my opinion, stories like this(built around the female lead and built around author's crush of the character) won't last long, and the quality will drop quickly by the time the MC peaked at their relationship with the fl, because the author tends to get bored at that time, as the 'scenarios' they've built in their mind have all been written. I hope that's not the case for you though. well, maybe you've thought of a lot of scenarios(I can tell, the profile picture, the name, etc), and it would make the story much longer and better. that's it for me then ;)
Pythia:You mean a detailed narrative description of a female lead... I took inspiration from multiple romance novels from top selling authors and then wrote my own based around the female lead of my story... There's a romance tag in a 3rd person story, what do you expect my friend? Also the huge x Ciri in the synopsis? Or the fact she's on the cover...Or that my account name is Ciri? In my experience reviews are subjective to the work and it's quality but i pinned yours anyway. Thanks for your criticism but please shush.
I think you may top the list of belligerent bigots i've met so far. A counter opinion and it's an 'alt account' and now you're assuming the biggest load of cow dung to date. Are you even reading the story? You've not met me or even spoke to me and yet you have the gall to say such things based upon a profile picture... If i was as you said, why would i bother with a slow burn 100+ chapter romance in which involves research of the greatest hits of the genre?
simp212:oh wow so that was your alt account. anyway, in my opinion, stories like this(built around the female lead and built around author's crush of the character) won't last long, and the quality will drop quickly by the time the MC peaked at their relationship with the fl, because the author tends to get bored at that time, as the 'scenarios' they've built in their mind have all been written. I hope that's not the case for you though. well, maybe you've thought of a lot of scenarios(I can tell, the profile picture, the name, etc), and it would make the story much longer and better. that's it for me then ;)
Not to mention the 240 words of creative description of the landscape and you take the 80 word description of the love interest as simping. You have issues. get help
simp212:oh wow so that was your alt account. anyway, in my opinion, stories like this(built around the female lead and built around author's crush of the character) won't last long, and the quality will drop quickly by the time the MC peaked at their relationship with the fl, because the author tends to get bored at that time, as the 'scenarios' they've built in their mind have all been written. I hope that's not the case for you though. well, maybe you've thought of a lot of scenarios(I can tell, the profile picture, the name, etc), and it would make the story much longer and better. that's it for me then ;)
so that was your alt account or not? cause if it is, it's rather sad for you to review your own novel using your alt account. now now, you said it yourself, your account name, the cover picture, your profile picture, all ciri. if your novel is not biased to her, then I don't know what is. and seriously, you just kept going, I reviewed it because I want it, and now you're salty, you said that reviews should be subjective, and I said my opinion, but now you're mad because I'm being subjective?
Pythia:Not to mention the 240 words of creative description of the landscape and you take the 80 word description of the love interest as simping. You have issues. get help
simp212:so that was your alt account or not? cause if it is, it's rather sad for you to review your own novel using your alt account. now now, you said it yourself, your account name, the cover picture, your profile picture, all ciri. if your novel is not biased to her, then I don't know what is. and seriously, you just kept going, I reviewed it because I want it, and now you're salty, you said that reviews should be subjective, and I said my opinion, but now you're mad because I'm being subjective?
great, so now you're using insults as self-defence, you look like a 'veteran' reader, yet your tolerance to comments are seemingly quite low, guess you're quite lucky as your story doesn't really have a big reach yet, otherwise, you'll burn out quickly.
Pythia:Are you hard of comprehension? Autistic or something?
It was a genuine question, i'm slightly autistic myself and make preconceived assumptions like you are...
simp212:great, so now you're using insults as self-defence, you look like a 'veteran' reader, yet your tolerance to comments are seemingly quite low, guess you're quite lucky as your story doesn't really have a big reach yet, otherwise, you'll burn out quickly.
maybe I am, maybe I'm not, who knows? never checked really. but that explains so much about your tendencies, maybe you have a delusional disorder too? you should check that out.
Pythia:It was a genuine question, i'm slightly autistic myself and make preconceived assumptions like you are...
simp212:maybe I am, maybe I'm not, who knows? never checked really. but that explains so much about your tendencies, maybe you have a delusional disorder too? you should check that out.
All this arguing aside, how extreme are the MC's morals? Is he the type to help a random person just because they ask, with no benefits in it for him?
Pythia:Who knows